Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Every person in the world has to enjoy life and that’s mean to do things which make him happy.
Some people believe that young people enjoy life more than older people. Unfortunally I think the same. I have some reasons for that which I will explore in the esse.
To begin with the reason some older people can’t enjoy their life is the health. Many of them have different deceases and they have to visit doctors and to take medication. For example my father has some deceases and he haven’t the opportunity to do the things that he adores. According to that when we are young and healthy we have to enjoy the life and everything around us. We have to be happy and calm and do the favorite things.
Second the older people have more responsibilities. They have childrens, mortiges, etc. Older people have to work, to look for their families. The young people don’t have kids and obligatories. They have more freedom to enjoy the life. For example when I was young I don’t have to think about money. I receive them from my parents. When you have less things to be worried you are more happy. The university of Sofia recently published information that 78 Percent of the young people enjoy the life more than the older.
Third older people keep theirselfs more. They can’t take the same risk as the young even that is connected with their dream. In other side the young people like the risk and they enjoy the life taking risks.
To sum up I believe that young people are happy and full of energy. They enjoy their life and use every minute for that purpose. Older people have more problem and they can’t enjoy their life like the younger.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun things is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ive them from my parents. When you have less things to be worried you are more happy...
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Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joy the life more than the older. Third older people keep theirselfs more. They ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, third, as to, for example, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21232875739 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430976430976 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4381304977 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.8333333333 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405346154796 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135946240902 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113610997011 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239200037169 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483202478356 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun things is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ive them from my parents. When you have less things to be worried you are more happy...
^^^^
Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joy the life more than the older. Third older people keep theirselfs more. They ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, third, as to, for example, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21232875739 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430976430976 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4381304977 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.8333333333 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405346154796 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135946240902 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113610997011 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239200037169 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483202478356 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.