Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects of human needs for farmland, hosing and industry instead of saving land for animals. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose that human needs are the more important. It is my firm belief that peoples needs are more significant for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with I am a human and if I want lo live and have perspective I need home, food, work. Actually the University of Sophia recently published that the 22 % of the humans are homeless and they are starving. The life is so hard for that part of humans. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Yo see, when I was on excursion in Tansania I was worried and scared of the condition of the people life. Most of them do not have homes and they are starving. There is no hygiene . As a result of this there are so many deceases and illnesses. The percent of the death in Tansania is increasing. For this reason I believe that the people need house, industry and etc.
Second the industry is so important for the humans life because the pharmacy is part of it. The pharmacy make different medicine to keep the humans life. Drawing from my own experience the humans mortality was so high in the past. Nowday the scientist imagine the vaccine and big par of the deceases are gone. When my mother was a child she suffers from chicken pox. Now we have a vaccine and my child does not need to has it. Moreover, the vaccine are free, the government pays for them. For this reason , I think the industry is very important part of out life.
To sum up, I strongly believe that to have a house, land and industry is so important for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, second, so, i think, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41993957704 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44618840521 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501510574018 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2419576428 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264066211188 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074741880849 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782272198009 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171546073902 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481929991868 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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