Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

Since early ages there has been an ongoing debate whether men and women are equal in all aspects. In our society, men have always been given a higher status as compared to women. It believes that they have more strength and mental ability. This arguments states one of such statement, where it says that they are not equally suited for many tasks due to their inherent physical differences. I do not completely agree with the statement. It is a myth spread by human which needs to be broken.

Although their physical structures differ, it does not mean that either of them is incapable of performing certain tasks. In earlier times during wars, role of women was only limited to acting as a facilitator to give medical services, carry inventory etc. Times have changed now. At present, in armed forces worldwide, both the genders of society are being employed on field jobs. They are seen equally capable to fight in wars and handle the struggle of war field. In fact, rather than differentiating on basis of their physical difference people are supposed to be judged on basis of their talents and capabilities. Promoting such argument not only creates imbalance in society but also is a cause of major arguments among people. This gives rise to issues at local level and criticism at public forum.

To avoid such criticism, many organizations have abolished any standards of selecting people on the basis of such criteria. Now, there is a coherent set of requirements and guidelines which needs to be fulfilled to qualify for a certain job or position. This is a positive measure towards a well-developed society. Even in construction companies nowadays, both men and women are employed for carrying out physical tasks such as digging, plumbing etc. There is no discrimination or underlined preference for any gender.

However, some may argue that this is not completely true, and in some of the activities due to physical differences they are suited for different tasks. One of such task is giving birth to a child. When a female delivers a baby, the pain beard by here is compared to all the bones of body breaking at the same time. Many assume that this pain can't be handled by men. Since this ability is only given to women, it can never be judged whether it is true or not. Until and unless a man becomes pregnant one can never know if he is able to handle such pain or not.

Thus a conclusion can be drawn that cogency of this argument is highly doubted. If we want a more stable and uplifted society which works for welfare of everyone we should not differentiate either of them just because they have been designed differently. The tasks carried out by one can be carried out by another with equal efficiency.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... have more strength and mental ability. This arguments states one of such statement,...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
...ngth and mental ability. This arguments states one of such statement, where it says th...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hat this is not completely true, and in some of the activities due to physical differences ...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e same time. Many assume that this pain cant be handled by men. Since this ability i...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...is able to handle such pain or not. Thus a conclusion can be drawn that cogency ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in fact, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77801268499 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64175881541 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536997885835 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2047885395 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8928571429 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.60714285714 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282752446202 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584490618372 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797166569807 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149306530787 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081127466253 0.0667264976115 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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