The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Culture is what defines a society.There are people with different cultures living in harmony all around the world.Every individual is defined by his personality which is shaped by his culture.I disagree with the author to a certain extent that the most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth , as most of today’s youth are not aware of the details of various cultural traditions followed by their own cultural community.
Firstly, with the advent of new technology and the changing modern conditions in order to survive these conditions and make a living most youth’s are away from their hometown and stay in metropolitan cities .These cities have a myriad of cultural influences which impact the youth , hence they are influenced by the cultural nuances of the majority of people that they hangout with. For instance , if a person from a small town in South India comes to Mumbai he might get influenced by the North Indian culture as most of his peers have descended from that part of India.
Moreover, this youth might also not have the idea about the cultural traditions been followed in their community as they live in the city where there is no single culture being followed.
Secondly,in a country like India which is a amalgamation of many different cultures.The cultural subtleties change within some kilometers. The culture which is predominant in a state might have various other cultural communities residing under the same native language.For instance, in a state like Maharashtra which predominantly consists of people of Maharashtrian culture speaking the Marathi language, there are still various community within the Maharashtrians like Brahmins , Kshatriyas which follow different traditions .Hence in order to understand these subtleties a more experienced adult must be consulted instead of youths.
However, the youths bring out some technological advancements in the anachronistic methods followed by various cultural communities . As some of these methods are not feasible enough in today’s day and age and also to reduce the complexity concerning the particular tradition. For instance , the age old tradition of arranged marriage in India where the bride and groom were married even though they did not know each other or had seen each other for that matter , but in today’s world even though arranged marriages are still a thing but various online websites and apps help in connecting these people through which they can judge if they are compatible or not before getting married. Having said that some ancient traditions are still followed the same way as before by many cultural communities.
In conclusion,the contemporary culture could be understood to some extent by the changes that are being made to the various ancient traditions by the youth.Although the nuances of any culture are more cogently understood when consulted with an experienced adult rather than youth .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39658848614 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92472140808 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488272921109 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.765446965 60.3974514979 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.090909091 118.986275619 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.6363636364 23.4991977007 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 5.21951772744 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291901203648 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109738260971 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119229003879 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162785050151 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13581970083 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 14.1392134831 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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