A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is what helps us in building our personality.Education plays an important role in shaping an individual.An educated person is more cognizant in differentiating the right from wrong.A person makes a living out of the education and the things he/she studies. I agree with the author that same national curriculum should be imparted to all students until they enter college to build a strong foundational knowledge which will further help them choose a right career path.
Firstly,a student studying in school is not in the position of taking right decisions about his /her career. As if the same curriculum is not enforced upon all students and the students are given choice to choose their subjects , they will do so because all the others are choosing the same and then realize that this subject was not suitable for them and in turn miss on the knowledge from the subject in which they genuinely had an interest.For instance , if a student who is inclined towards arts is choosing science and mathematics just because all his other friends are doing so will end up not pursuing his interest in the developing stage of his life.Hence a proper amalgamation of all subjects must be included in the national curriculum and followed by all students.
Secondly,since the students will have a fundamental idea about all subjects it will provide them with a better understanding of subjects they would further like to pursue in college. As colleges provide a much in depth understanding of subjects, a student must have a keen interest in learning those otherwise he will find the whole curriculum as daunting as ever and would just study that for the sake of it.As without a fundamental understanding of a subject sometimes we think that we like a particular subject but then as we study it a bit in depth we find out that this is just not our cup of tea , this process can happen in school only which will help a student in choosing the right career track. For instance , if a student assumes that he will study computer science as it is a very lucrative career and has high prospects he might think of choosing this subject in college , but if the fundamentals are taught in school and then the student realises that he is not able to cope up with the programming of computers this will help him in analysing other choices of subjects to choose in college.
However,as far as some common subjects are concerned like Science ,Mathematics and English which have a much broader scope should be the same in all schools across the nation . Having said that the cultural nuances of every state come out in subjects like History , Geography and Civics which should be modified to some extent according to the area of context.A person living in a particular states must be aware of the historical conquests , geographical terrains and political journeys of the state they are residing in. For instance , a person living in the state of Maharashtra must be aware about the historic battles of Peshwas living in Maharashtra and also about the gigantic ranges of Sahyadris and Vindhyas running across the state than a person living in some other state.
In conclusion, a fundamental curriculum which covers all subjects with the level of difficulty of a school going student should be divised for the entire nation.As it would further help the student in choosing the right career path as illustrated above.Along with this every state must include the peculiar aspects of that state in order to develop a better understanding about past and the future of the place a person is residing in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2996.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 610.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91147540984 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80560921635 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42131147541 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 926.1 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.471103961 60.3974514979 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.363636364 118.986275619 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4545454545 23.4991977007 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257552859394 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114050919551 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102963989939 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15236512368 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538417808447 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 14.1392134831 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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