An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Morals and ethics are factors that define every personality. Every person performs actions within the sphere of their own morality which defines good or bad.Every action has some consequences which are either good or bad depending upon the impact that they make.The author here is trying to say that a particular action should be declared as morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad , I agree with the author as most of the times if the end result is in our favour then we tend to neglect all the bad things which result in that journey.
Firstly,our actions or the actions suggested to us by others might seem a bit harsh at first but in retrospect can prove to be a boon rather than a bane.This action may not be in our favour but in a longer term this could prove fruitful .For instance, any professor who is strict about his subject can be very hard to cope up with. The professor being fastidious about details might harass the student about minor details,which might seem a pain to the student at first, but this approach might help him in his future as he would be organized and have a detailed knowledge about the subject.
Secondly,as it is righly said that “Ends justify the means”.The actions that a person does would be concluded as morally correct if they result in the greater good of the entire society rather than a single individual.As actions with selfish gains can be correct in ones perspective but would not be viewed as morally correct by people around the individual.
However, the action which results in our favour might not be so,when thought out in a more holistic approach.For instance, during wars the people of their respective countries fight for the pride of their country.During both the world wars ,millions of people participated in it and even though some countries won the war effectively but this resulted in the loss of thousands of lives which made their victory pyrrhic. Hence even though the end result was in the favour of a particular country it still had effects which where detrimental to the society in general.
In conclusion,I would like to say that since the morals and values of each individual are subject to change depending upon the situation they are in , it would be justified only if their end result is good or in their favour otherwise the individual will be coined as immoral.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78758949881 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57867772745 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494033412888 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.632444247 60.3974514979 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.75 118.986275619 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.375 23.4991977007 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.21951772744 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354456415752 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144108467599 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158119558933 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199274041991 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161541911054 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 14.1392134831 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.62 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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