The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Music is a form of art. Art is a field which is very subjective. In art, a thing that someone likes could be abhorred by other.Similarly in music a song loved by a person would not be so likeable to another.The point that the author is trying to make that real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead.I disagree with this view of the author as people with real talent will always get recognized in someway or the other.
Firstly,it is generally observed that people believe in what they see.The best way to appreciate or criticize something is when you see it live.After the death of a person, the only way to analyze his art is either by reading something about him or by watching his videos.The musicians popularity can easily be judged when he is alive by taking some poll or survey about it.Moreover when the musician is dead we will never be able to study about the nuances that led to the evolution of that music. The experiences ,knowledge and the personality traits of a musician can coherently be understood when he or she is alive.
Secondly, every person is born with some talent ,we as individuals should strive to recognize that talent and work hard towards it and someday we will surely gain some success. Fame and popularity are directly proportional to the quality of work.Even if a musician is famous at a point and then the quality of his music degrades his popularity will soon decrease, but someone who always works hard towards his goal might initially not gain success but surely someday he will. For instance, A.R Rahman he is a renowed indian musician who started from nowhere ,had no connection to the music industry and today he holds one of the most prestigious award in the world i.e The Oscar for his work in Slumdog Millionaire.This shows us that with preserverance and humility we can achieve great heights.
Finally,people might argue that in todays digital world, due to a huge influence of media in our daily lives musicians are made famous by massive PR stunts instead of their actual music quality.There are a few examples to prove this point, but this examples are far and scarce.Even those examples fade away after couple of composition and albums and are forgotten even before they die, leave alone their work being appreciated by the coming generation.
In conclusion,every person possess unique talent.In the field of music this is prominent and the real talent can be accurately assessed from the work of artist and not by the fame which he or she achieves.Real talent will always find its way over the ephermeral fame and no matter what, life or death cannot articulate its value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 404.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68811881188 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25867447989 2.78398813304 117% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532178217822 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.8473053892 175% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.614471502 57.8364921388 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.8 119.503703932 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 23.324526521 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.70786347227 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.25449101796 476% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578871488542 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304731750691 0.0743258471296 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0187671994148 0.0701772020484 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380022176758 0.128457276422 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214814629472 0.0628817314937 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 14.3799401198 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 48.3550499002 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.197005988 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.5979740519 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32208582834 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.1389221557 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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