The youth is a valuable asset any nation possesses. Nurturing and preparing its youngsters for the challenges of life is, therefore crucial for any society. The claim posits that the best way of doing so is, to instil a sense of cooperation and coexistence into its youth and discourage competition. I personally feel a leader is an individual who inspires and helps those around him to develop holistically. To succeed in any field, cooperation and teamwork are vital. However, competition can also prove to be a significant tool, since it can drive individuals to perform to the best of their capacities and therefore undermining its importance may not be wise.
Consider the field of science. The Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 2019 was shared among three individuals for the development of lithium-ion batteries. This is prime example of cooperation where like minds come together to create ground-breaking inventions to benefit society. In such cases competition can seriously impede growth. If these scientists had worked individually, and aimed for arriving at the solution before anybody else, perhaps they wouldn't have achieved this feat. In these situations teamwork is a prime factor for success and instilling a sense of cooperation in youngsters can surely prove beneficial.
Another, very common example, which can be viewed in every nation, is the general election. Every democratic country holds elections to choose its representatives to govern the nation for the upcoming term. The President or the Prime Minister might be the most important elected individual, but will he be able to run the nation without his cabinet? It is the teamwork and cooperation of all the elected members that decides whether a government is successful or not. If the leader of the ruling party cannot afford to work alone; he has to have the ability to resolve disputes among his co-workers, work with individuals of diverging mindsets and essentially act as a catalyst for cohesion, without which the government cannot survive.
Considering the same example of governments, without winning the election would these individuals have the opportunity to run the nation? It is here where competition drives the members of the political party to work hard during the campaigns. Similarly in every field without a sense of competition, individuals may not be able to stay sharp and always perform to the best of their capabilities.
Keeping all these examples in mind, I feel a balance of competition an cooperation is essential for any leader to be successful. Therefore, analyzing the situation and acting accordingly with discretion is important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, therefore, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28436018957 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06500259707 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8263306209 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14187377318 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412512966458 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398840177852 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756123609489 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369013233943 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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