II agree with the statement that in almost all professions and academic fields, imagination is important than knowledge. There are many examples from the past that bulwark the point that imagination is an important aspect to make progress. For example, Thomas Alva Edison imagined to invent bulb that utilizes electrical energy. However, there are many knowledgeable people but all are not famous personality. Thus, it can be said that not all erudite person are able to leave mark on the society. I would like explore this further in the following lines.
First and foremost, knowledge is easily available to all. Imagination gives aim to utilize the acquired knowledge. For example, Wright brothers' imagined a vehicle that will fly in the sky and using their knowledge they turned their imagination into reality. They invented airplane, which is a reliable and fastest source of transport in today's world. The knowledge was available for all but it was their imagination that led to such great invention.
Besides this, imagination is a powerful tool in the world of business. Every businessman imagines to expand his business using the knowledge they possess. It is the imagination that helps a businessman to take his company to the great heights of success. A felicitous example would be Bill Gates. He was a common man when he imagined to develop something that will change the world of software. Today he is one of the richest man in the world. Almost all the computers have one or the other Microsoft application installed in it. It was his imagination that made a difference.
Lastly, art is an example where one might not achieve heights of success if imagination is not used. A writer of a fictional novel has to use his imagination to write something interesting. J K Rowling is an apt example of this. She used her imagination and wrote a series of novel based on pure imagination. Everyone knows that J K Rowling is a millionaire because of the Harry Potter series, as she utilized her imagination in best possible way. Every painter knows how to mix colors and do painting on the canvas. But few utilizes their imagination and thus, are famous as they are able to create something exceptional on the canvas.
To sum up, imagination is an important tool to use the knowledge one possess in right direction. There are many people that have knowledge but they are not able to use their imagination to create something out of the box. Therefore, they are commoners.One who uses their imagination to achieve their goal are famous in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagined inventing'.
Suggestion: imagined inventing
...ogress. For example, Thomas Alva Edison imagined to invent bulb that utilizes electrical energy. H...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagines expanding'.
Suggestion: imagines expanding
...he world of business. Every businessman imagines to expand his business using the knowledge they p...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagined developing'.
Suggestion: imagined developing
...Bill Gates. He was a common man when he imagined to develop something that will change the world of...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...series, as she utilized her imagination in best possible way. Every painter knows how t...
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Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
... the box. Therefore, they are commoners.One who uses their imagination to achieve t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92609699769 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81970916548 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4896073903 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7761135715 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5517241379 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9310344828 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1724137931 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119200097465 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354886035613 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503722722409 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738985209129 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379836195059 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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