A nation should require all of its student to study the same curriculum until they enter to college
The speaker asserts the compulsion of same curricula to all of their students during pre-college period. All of their students, who were the future leaders of different sectors can made all round development on doing these. I am in consonet with speaker claim by three mentioned reasons.
Before entering into the college life, it is one of the most prolific period of the students in terms of building their capacity. It is the best period for them in developed their physical, mental and social capacity. Children or student behavioural pattern of any individual shows their future direction. For instances, when children are teach the good moral education, they may have the good future. However, for this happens, nation should be circumspect for the syllabus which can be taught to their students. Unless, there is proper curricula, all these things goes in vain.
During the school period, various subject can be kept in curricula, therefore, students can have broad and divesified knowledge of the various fiels. This creates possibility to understand the life by any students, by reading and understanding of the different subject matter. Morever, child life is the period in which any children have malleable mind. Due to which it creates possibility to learn various subject matter. Also, nation can include pre-vocational course and physical education course in their curricula. When any children is physically active, he can have good health and finally can study better. Thus, sports is highly crucial in the curricula before college life. And, after reaching college time, there is very few times for the sports activities.
The opponents of this claim argue that on providing of specific subject matter from their childhood, they will have specificity, and will have better future by doing better in specific parts. However, only being specific in one field make the life mundane, and cannot face the challanges during different spatial of life.
In sum, any nation should kept the same curricula over their country, which can inculcate their student with all terms of development, and to make the strong foundation of their students. This will ultimately produce good manpower for their nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...ction. For instances, when children are teach the good moral education, they may have...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are proper curricula'?
Suggestion: there are proper curricula
...an be taught to their students. Unless, there is proper curricula, all these things goes in vain. Duri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re is proper curricula, all these things goes in vain. During the school period...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26836158192 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6067814365 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6076829228 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8095238095 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157274074879 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484012853865 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503042437067 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990455510092 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506737868021 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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