Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Friends, company of life, are one of the momentous things in our life. Wherever we go--in the parts of our life, interaction is required which finally makes a friend. Without friend, it is difficult to conduct any activities solely to anybody. Personally I believe that it is not more important to keep our old friends forever rather than making a new friend, in this flexible and evolving world. I feel this way for three reasons, which explores in the following essays.
First of all, on making a new friends, we can learn about different new types of culture and traditions. In this type of globalized world, new friends appear in each corner of the world. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. As I am from Chhetri caste, according to our caste system. Once, I have gone to my newar friend, I got an opportunity to learn about Maha festival. Since, our family and our caste didn't know about these. But, when I got an opportunity to learn something about these festival in my friend home, I really felt excited. Being, a different friend from different religion: If we have a christian friend, we can learn about christmas and celebrate it, If muslim, we can learn more about ID,etc. It is a great opportunity to learn about other culture, which was really a enjoyable moment.
Secondly, in this evolving world, we human have always certain obstacles/problems in our life. To solve it, we always requires a friend. It leads to any complex form of task to a simpler form. For instances-- Once, I have a some health related problem, and I was in too hurry for my bachelor level examination. When I have reached to the hospital, it was found to be so packed and busy. I felt so panic. Consequently, I have made an idea, and started to make a rapport with the assistant of hospital who takes the patient card. Finally, I became a success in two ways: I got an opportunity to fast in the line, and person who helped me become my new friend. Generally, new friends were generally made in these difficulty types of circumstances.
Finally, in this globalized world, wherever we go, we met with new people. It is not possible to ignore anybody during the time of interaction. It is obvious that the friend circle is always at an increasing rate. For example, my brother does not likes the activities which were monotonous. As a result, he has changed his job in a one or two year. He always have new and new circle. He prefers to enjoy in different and new environment. When there will be a repitition of same things in a life, it will not be pleasurable.
In the conclusion, I am not of the opinion of the speakers' claim, because in this globalized and flexible world; human faced different types of problems, and thus make a new friends in the life. Morever, it is good opportunity to learn and enjoy with the new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...ays. First of all, on making a new friends, we can learn about different new types...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...stival. Since, our family and our caste didnt know about these. But, when I got an op...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this festival' or 'these festivals'?
Suggestion: this festival; these festivals
...an opportunity to learn something about these festival in my friend home, I really felt excite...
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Line 5, column 728, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...t, If muslim, we can learn more about ID,etc. It is a great opportunity to learn abo...
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Line 5, column 807, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n about other culture, which was really a enjoyable moment. Secondly, in this e...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...ems in our life. To solve it, we always requires a friend. It leads to any complex form ...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to hurry'?
Suggestion: to hurry
...me health related problem, and I was in too hurry for my bachelor level examination. When...
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Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
... rate. For example, my brother does not likes the activities which were monotonous. A...
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Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...his job in a one or two year. He always have new and new circle. He prefers to enjoy...
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Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
... types of problems, and thus make a new friends in the life. Morever, it is good opport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62721893491 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73572508304 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471400394477 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1053893303 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152134517772 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410584557264 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499405727755 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102782555752 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448189028028 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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