Drivers should pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is heavy traffic.
Simply, a layman can understand that busy traffic generally means a greater number of individuals. Greater people reflect a greater amount of income. It is obvious that when there is heavy traffic then they should endure more fees. I feel this way for the following reasons, which I will explore in the following essays.
To begin with, the city streets that were busy might have a high number of passengers that were arriving and departing. Any vehicle conductors can collect a large sum of money from this group of people. This can later be used in the progress of the country My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I used to go to my college by micro-bus, while I was at college. Generally, during college time, it carries a huge number of people. As a result, it can collect a greater sum of money from the people. Consequently, it would not be a daunting task for the conductor to give a small fraction of money to the collectors on the way of the path.
Finally, the road department has to frequently repair the path that would degrade fast. This would generally happen when there is bulk traffic. At this time, it requires a high budget for the process of renovation. For instance, one of the busy highways of my country, many vehicles pass regularly. Due to this condition, the road has been frequently eroded. Without regular maintenance, it would be difficult for the vehicle. Nevertheless, the government alone cannot handle it alone. It is why the government or any other parties in the contract were allowed to collect the fee.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that there required to collect the additional sum of money in heavy traffic. This is because the government could collect more amount of tax, and can further in other deveopment process, and because roads needs frequent renovation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78797468354 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70146237703 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1952710308 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0476190476 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173751253358 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478296764282 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592799424126 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104085855815 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512965648074 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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