Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently

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Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.

Different new problems occurs and passed from the society. To solve the existing problems and precludes other imminent problems and disasters, some representative from the every society were sent as a member of parliament. It is necessary to every political leaders to meets the needs which was promised during the time of election; otherwise, there credentiality will be abated. Neverthless, political leaders also can made new laws and policies which is innocuous to any societ by preparing certain principles and objectives.

Every political leaders must understand every felt need within their society--as being one of the representatives of his / her society. Political leader must sake of their personal benifit for yielding their society. For instances--political leaders should always focus in the basic infrastructure facilities--health, electricity, transportation and education; and observes for quality of life for every individual members of the society. Unless, they observe the difficulty of tardy citizens, they were not the real political leaders. If political leaders can do so , only they can deserve trust among the public. For instances, socio-political leaders like Mahatma Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, Martin Luther King Jr, etc were always in the sake of their citizens, and thus why they always get championed from the society.

Far from the fulfilling of felt needs, every political leaders can think about the new policies, laws that directly enhances and promotes the development of their society. For instances, political leader can make new rules which will abate the crime in their society, also look towards the accretion of employment for their citizens and to increase the per-capita income of their country. They should always focus on the views and opinion of the public while making objectives, principles and during the ammendation of any laws.

However, in the game of politics, majority of the political leader were always try to gives the false belief to their citizens. This types of scenario leads to the political instabilty of any country. These political leader can't remains in the image of public , and can't be re-elected, unless, they will not compromise their sake for yielding of public.

In conclusion, unless, the political leaders were in the favour of public, they can't withstand for the long period of time in the politics. It is therefore; every political leaders must understand the demands and opinion of the public and should addressed it for their sustainablity in political stances.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... leaders. If political leaders can do so , only they can deserve trust among the p...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...ity of the political leader were always try to gives the false belief to their citi...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'give'.
Suggestion: give
...the political leader were always try to gives the false belief to their citizens. Thi...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'lead'.
Suggestion: lead
... their citizens. This types of scenario leads to the political instabilty of any coun...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... of any country. These political leader cant remains in the image of public , and ca...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ader cant remains in the image of public , and cant be re-elected, unless, they wi...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nt remains in the image of public , and cant be re-elected, unless, they will not co...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ders were in the favour of public, they cant withstand for the long period of time i...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ublic, they cant withstand for the long period of time in the politics. It is therefore; every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44050632911 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01032813039 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9896560721 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.388888889 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26171398365 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101140752016 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623831252412 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174470024538 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478343018324 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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