16. Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
this topic argues on the distinct two opinions whether the government officer should follow which side of stands between fundamental thinking of the public and specific principles and objectivities. I agree with that persisting committed to special rules and keeping objectivities is the better attitude for political leader. even though I'm standing one direction, the following essay will discuss about both advantages and disadvantages on the issues of the position of political leaders.
Admittedly, responding the citizens contains plenty of gains for the individual status as an political leaders because amendments and forging new rules with the opinions from the most of interesting groups augment the possibility to be erected again at the next competitions to maintain his positions. In addition, following the public might be the right way in the democratic society that is pervasive concept in the world and ignoring them perhaps illegal behaviors as a representative of the public. Regarding on the issues, I agree with some extent on the risk to remain the particular principles, but the total amount of benefits we can take should be larger as a results.
first, the ordinary person living daily life are generally busy man focusing only their own interest and do not thoroughly consider the main problems even it is what we have directly faced in our communities. they do not have the time to deal with it in the view point of the social matter. Therefore, responding and applying opinions from various and different interest group might cause the more confounding and will not reach to any agreement.
Second, the reasons why the member of society lead the privilege to the government officers and political leader is to give their rights to determine social issues to them in order to increase the efficiency of the determination process on the distinct social matter. although political leader must listen the public opinion, they do not need to be required to follow all of interest groups. Believing his opinions will be the first agreement in different interest group to reach the final agreement.
Lastly, The political leaders may be a great person on solving and weighting the social issues so he can sort the order of the priority suggested from the interest groups. Thus, following his opinion give higher possibility to reach to the best conclusion considering all the each opinions from every member in the society.
In conclusion, this essay discussed on the issue of the extent of political leader's stance on how much he need to reflect public opinions to make a best socially difficult decision. although the evidences in the opposite side mentioned in the 2nd paragraph sounds conceivable, the argument will be fruitful if they consider the factors refered main issues before deciding which opinions they follows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22173913043 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80168309528 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528260869565 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7093170767 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.125 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214208261301 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700315578988 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496412731262 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111100161863 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563394851025 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.