Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
The issue of whether or not political leaders should be strongly committed to particular principles and objectives bypassing the effective response to yield public opinion in order to be an effective political leader is contentious one. I strongly concede with speaker assertion that in order to yield certain benefits to the inclusive races, politician should always forgive their own principles and objectives so that they can be an munificent and generous leader by providing immense to the lower indigenous classes of people.
First of all, in order to be in touch with the different levels of the people, politician should sometimes goes beyond their moral principles and duties. For instance, King Tribhuwan of Nepal, is one of the loyal and venerated person as he went beyond his kingship legacy so as to provide support to the people of lower ethnic races. Due to his motivational figure, he had remained in the heart of millions of Nepalese citizen as the father of Nepal. Therefore, only following and engendering moral principles and convention never provide enormous benefit to all the citizen of the nation.
Secondly, enforcing moral issues and legal rules only provide support for the instantaneous period of time but to be in the mind and body of the people, several interaction with public should also be done. For instance, any politician who remain reticent even having enormous knowledge within him never can yield practical results in the field regarding any issues. Thus, to be an effective personnel and leader, enough interaction and enhancement with the public citizen should be made which can radically touch the sentiments of the people. Due to this, the distance between individuals and leaders would be shortened and hence, the leader will not be only as dummy leader but will be predicted as almighty who can eradicated the problems of the people.
Some may argue that forgetting and bypassing moral norms and values may diverge leader from their track to the path of vulnerability. Therefore, every political personnel should be bound with their principle before providing services to the citizen. Hence, they can easily win the hope of local individuals in every projects which they are thinking to designed. Thereby, the longevity and success of the project can be installed. However, this point is flawed since practicing moral principles lonely can't provide success. But if such moral principles are practical based , then it can provide solution to every problems arising in the path of work. Therefore, political leaders should be faithful to the general people on providing several services to them.
All in all if the above factors are contemplated we can easily reach a conclusion that practicing moral principles with the aim of providing services to the people can yield successful results. Therefore, to be effective leader, there should be sound personnel with vision who can understand the feeling and tension of people before fulfilling their own deeds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not political leaders should be strongly co...
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Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ples and objectives so that they can be an munificent and generous leader by provi...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...the people, politician should sometimes goes beyond their moral principles and dutie...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n as he went beyond his kingship legacy so as to provide support to the people of lower ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y provide support for the instantaneous period of time but to be in the mind and body of the p...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun interaction seems to be countable; consider using: 'several interactions'.
Suggestion: several interactions
... be in the mind and body of the people, several interaction with public should also be done. For in...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... the problems of the people. Some may argue that forgetting and bypassing moral nor...
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Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ince practicing moral principles lonely cant provide success. But if such moral prin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uch moral principles are practical based , then it can provide solution to every p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23188405797 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73125179301 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4199377638 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243652279777 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855465773396 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762171792611 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156549213552 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737209058665 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.