Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People may have a different view that may or not match our interests. We generally like the person who has a view in accordance with us. However, I believe that it would be better to know or read the people having a different view from me. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there is no such unanimous on this earth. On encountering the different groups, we can reach to the different attitudes of people. It helps to understand and learn a variety of things, which increases personal creativity. My personal experience is a compelling example of things. From my childhood, I used to read several types of books and dealing with different groups of people. With the former, it helps me a lot to write in theory subjects like social science, moral science, environmental education, etc, while the latter helped me to behave with different groups of people. Have I focus on the same type of books, I would never secure a good percentage during my high school with the parochial field of study. Moreover, having diverse friends help me to become more mature.
Finally, on doing the same type of things, there would be a mundane life. It would be a great opportunity and be excited when interacting with different things in our life. To be more specific, it would not feel refreshing on watching the same types of movies. Any person at high school, during the time of examination, feels monotonous on practicing the same topic. As a result, he/she would practice the different chapter viz; algebra, arithmetic, and geometry simultaneously. This would bring a new taste to the person periodically, and intrigued the person to work in the different parts. Have a person practice the same type of questions frequently, whether it is liked or not, would increase the boring level.
To sum up, having news reading and watching of the contrasting ideas is momentous. This is because it helps a person to have a broad field of the idea, and consequently knowledge; and because the life of a person becomes more interesting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...with different groups of people. Have I focus on the same type of books, I would neve...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, i feel, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79944289694 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7677875993 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5359150221 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144056426436 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488153840997 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514925888744 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100571873223 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445214651566 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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