A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The prompt suggests that all of the students of a nation should follow a uniform and specific curriculum. In my opinion, I yield that students should follow a specific uniform national currriculum up to a specific stage. After that, they should be left with their choice to select which ones they need to take. I am going to sate the reasons why I have chosen a nuanced position.
First of all, students have to know of some basic things before they become an engineer, a scientist or a banker etc. To know them about their country, their country's constitution that they must need to know to lead a hassleless life, and their rights and duties, they must be taught a specific curricululm covering those stated already and so on. For instance, it has been frequently seen in our society that a doctor does not know about his or her country's history, constituion, basic rights and duties. If everbody was taught a specific curriculum that covered those stuff, he or she was bound to get acquainted with these things.
Finally, after procuring a specific curriculum, they should be left with the choice to go futher at their own. Now if they are not left with the choice to go at their own, sociecty will not get the expertises that it needs. For instance, a doctor who has invested a large amount of time to gather knowledge about the things outside his or her field could use this time to enrich his or her knowledge on medical research. By doing so, he or she could indulge himself or herself in the research work leading to the invention of cure of something, whic hwas not found up to that time. Or, he or she could utilize his or her time to progress substantially in his or her field. As a result ,society will get the maximum from that they could offer.
The task discussed so far is not a trivial one. It is very difficult to go toa final pint without much debate. In my view, I suppor and suggets that up to a point in the education life, stiudents should follow a uniform and same national curriculum. After that they must be left with their choice to proceed futhher at their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
The prompt suggests that all of the students of a nation should follow a un...
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Suggestion: ,
...ntially in his or her field. As a result ,society will get the maximum from that t...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a uniform and same national curriculum. After that they must be left with their choic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52894736842 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46073176739 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2558971883 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177282622145 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647103479439 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843539740943 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128248196954 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793130948994 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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