A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The universities have students coming from all over the nation, with eclectic academic backgrounds. Universities offer the same course for everyone irrespective of their academic background or intellectual level. Hence, in my views, a nation should require all of its students to study a uniform national curriculum until they enter college.
If students come have different academic backgrounds then it can be difficult for the university to come up with a uniform curriculum that accomadates all of its students. The professors will have to adapt a pace that is suitable for all. Students may also react differently to the university's uniform curriculum, based on their previous curriculum in schools. Hence, a uniform national curriculum can be beneficial for all.
Students come from different economical backgrounds, some of them belong to affluent families and some, come from families who can hardly afford for essential goods. It is important that irrespective of their backgrounds, students should get an equitable education as it is a minimum human right and also it can help maintain accord in the society.
Diverse educational backgrounds can also create differences among students as students have a tendency to form groups with like minded people. This is an innocuous behavior only when it is confined to the formation of groups but this can cause problems when one group becomes haughty and looks down upon others. This can be prevented if the students study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
This uniform curriculum must be carefully designed as it can effect all the students in a nation. Hence, this is can challenging as if the curriculum does not accommodate all the concepts and subjects that a student needs to learn then it might effect his or her career. The curriculum should train the students such that they are prepared to face the competitive world.
Hence, a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, then, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86452449662 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483076923077 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9259711281 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469288043719 0.243740707755 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207936025315 0.0831039109588 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235580716081 0.0758088955206 311% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341847467618 0.150359130593 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258800158294 0.0667264976115 388% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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