The curriculum of the school shapes the future of the students. However, it is one of the most important task of the education board to design its curriculum which covers all the aspects required by them for their future. As the prompt suggests, the country should provide the universal coursework to all the students before the they enter their university. I mostly agree that they should provide same coursework nationwide, but also agree that extra classes can be provided to students who wish to stand out in c
Firstly, when the coursework of all the students is same, they could be assessed with same level. This would create a common accessment system and thus, there would be no partiality with any student. Also, this would be easier for the teachers to teach the course. Furthermore, when there are different educational boards in the the country, conducting the exams, it becomes biased, as they tend to make the board examinations easy which could benefit the students of specific region. For instance, In India, there are state boards as well as ccentral board, but state board exams are compararative easy than central one. Also, to enter to the colleges of particular state, the seats for state boards are more rather than central. Hence, this creates rift between the students and thus is biased. The student of central board, after studying difficult curriculam, has a lot of competation and has to work more hard. Thus, for a unbiased and a fair examination system, it is necessary for a student should have the same coursework.
Secondly, the nation having same coursework can easily be judged by the foreign education systems. The trend to study abroad has been increasing day by day, hence, ehrn they have the same curriculam and education system, it becomes a lot easier to prove the equivalency of the coursework studies. Also, when students are studying in regional boards, there is a probability that the student has studied in thir native language too. This could, not only lead to difference in the mode of systems, but also make such students differentiated form others. They cannot communicate easily in the languages that is used worldwide. For instance, students who wish to study abroad have to show english translation from their regional marksheets and sometimes they get tempared. Hence, same curriculam is more inportant in such cases.
However, in contrast, there are few students who are brilliant and would like to study in most competative careers. Hence,I believe that there should be extra curriculam for the students who wish to stiudy competative course in their college. This would help them to work more in the field they wish to go in and prepare them for such careers.
In conclusion, I believe that the students should be tough same coursework in the whole nation, which enables them to compete and communicate easily, in an unbiased manner. Though, student who wishes to learn more can be taught extra courses, but it should not be the mode of judgement.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...l coursework to all the students before the they enter their university. I mostly agree ...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ere are different educational boards in the the country, conducting the exams, it becom...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ere are different educational boards in the the country, conducting the exams, it becom...
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Line 3, column 927, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on and has to work more hard. Thus, for a unbiased and a fair examination system,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...study in most competative careers. Hence,I believe that there should be extra curr...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unbiased manner" with adverb for "unbiased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...them to compete and communicate easily, in an unbiased manner. Though, student who wishes to learn mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2514.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99801192843 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62365195806 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453280318091 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7157286944 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228906073055 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689805083066 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481195845376 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14494326196 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493895294299 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...l coursework to all the students before the they enter their university. I mostly agree ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ere are different educational boards in the the country, conducting the exams, it becom...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ere are different educational boards in the the country, conducting the exams, it becom...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 927, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on and has to work more hard. Thus, for a unbiased and a fair examination system,...
^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...study in most competative careers. Hence,I believe that there should be extra curr...
^^
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unbiased manner" with adverb for "unbiased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...them to compete and communicate easily, in an unbiased manner. Though, student who wishes to learn mo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2514.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99801192843 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62365195806 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453280318091 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7157286944 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228906073055 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689805083066 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481195845376 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14494326196 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493895294299 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.