A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
National curriculum is a unique term, where it's not being practical for one nation to follow up. It is the students decision, whether, they opt for subjects, which interest them, or a boring- non interesting subject will lead them to have a lack of indulgement in their studies. Will it be fair sided for a country to have national curriculum or raft of curriculum to be choosen, I strongly disagree for a nation to have national curriculum.
The subject are of the various kinds, whether a students enjoys it or not, they are beneficial for many others, who perceive the amaible for themselves. The Indian students exhibit various level of examination, whereas, to that of the students in North Korea, Why so? The reason behind to is that, the students in India have more exceptional curriculum as( CBSE, ICSE, Stateboard ) as a part of syllabus in their countries, which helps to choose according to their insight and favorable to them. However, the students in North Korea feel a pressure of badger from their own country to take up the curriculum that has been preemptive to them. Due to this, there is a no freedom of student to be pecular for what they want to perceive, rather it's being as enforcement and hideous to co-op to the standards that, have been already set.
Albeit, when a country has a same curriculum in their schedule, there are more chances for them to discriminate nor differentiate, whether the school students being able to go through their set of standard targets. In other words, it helps the college selection process and makes it easier for the institution, for admit the undergrads without, evaluating them with futhermore, unwanted entrace examnination ( such as, JEE, GRE....), this might help a student to not have external evaluation. But, is it still the best idealogy to have national curriculum, when one does not get to deceive what they are passionate above or feeling bored in their classes, by no just fitting under the right rule framed by the government. Indeed, it leds for a student to understand their position and their best source of their skill and expectise. It could go bleek in their interest to study or worst case scenario, even going to school.
Thus, from the above stated that, national curriculum can be a easy task from the side of the government to have unity among the students, but forsure it's not going to enlighten the students to have freedom to choosing, or to explore the place of their expectise and it leads to remorselly, congriet to not being able to deciside their side of point of view. Hence, a nation should not require all of its students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, whereas, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81152993348 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67751924296 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509977827051 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6667826086 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0666666667 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277067129101 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118347086664 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123442805652 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18813671286 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619683561698 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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