Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science and technology have been a great part in out current life as an individual person, or as in our sociey. During our golden ages we were unaware about the dieseases that caused and what could be the precautions that could've have been taken, back during those days. But in current raise and substaintial development in reasearch we are being able to identity the sickness and precautions that could be taken. Even though, science and technology are a plus but still it could still be a question whether it will be able to solve all the society's problem.
The air pollution rate in India have been increased from 75 percentage to 89 percentage in a five years life span, due to which the countries health rate of the citizens have increased by 67 percentage. But, in the next ten years the government were being able to reduce the pollution by 50 percentage, How? The reason behind it was the advanced technology and scientist have found a way of implementing "Green emission gas" and "E-vehicle" has a mode of transportation, because of which people started to see decrease in the the health crises and the safety of using public transportation.
Although, science nad technology have increased in vast way still it's a boon for the upcoming alpha kids. For an instance, the report from the Harvard University, have stated that, the early Gen-z kids were being able to communicate and talk in their two years old, but, the current generation alpha kids aren't being able to cope up with them, the reason is because of the screen time and the alone time they sepend with themselves and not being able to interact with the kids outside their comfort zone. From this report, researcher's from speech pathoogy have concluded that, this may affect the kids from being able to be an extrovert, but, rathe be an introvert from not being able to get along with their peers.
These two instances are much clear and on point and no matter how the science and technology may improve in our near future it will always have both positive and negative impact in people's life, which won't be able to solve all the problem of the society. Indeed, it may increase the chance of neglecting some, but rather not all of them. Thus, Science and technology will not be able to solve all of tge society's problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... five years life span, due to which the countries health rate of the citizens have increa...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...which people started to see decrease in the the health crises and the safety of using p...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...which people started to see decrease in the the health crises and the safety of using p...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nology have increased in vast way still its a boon for the upcoming alpha kids. For...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... but, the current generation alpha kids arent being able to cope up with them, the re...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...g able to cope up with them, the reason is because of the screen time and the alone time t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77114427861 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66500003611 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504975124378 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9400608893 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.538461538 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9230769231 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258020883677 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113076419232 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961859894264 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17047599539 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752352490221 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.