The city of Winston has two large department stores: Namen and Roscoe. Namen is known for its high-end designer fashions, while Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options. Both Namen and Roscoe are each considering opening another store in the growing suburb of Salem, where the population has grown over 50% in the last three years and where the median income is $75,000. Namen’s executives argue that as population and median income increase, people are willing to spend more money on clothing. However, Roscoe’s executives believe that the suburbs are more family oriented, and therefore their store will be more profitable than their competitor Namen.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The city of Winston has two large department stores: Namen and Roscoe. And their, basic claim is that, they can sustain their business in the "growing suburb", will their be evidence that they can develope their stores there? Are the median income stated by the author true? Will people really being using their money on clothing?
In the growing suburb of Salem, the population has been grown over 50 percentage in the last three years, is this evidence absolute in a way the deparmental stores from the city of Winston can start their business? What are the hypothesis that the income over the last three years are even perfect mentioned by the author, there are no substantial answer that this statement is true, whether their median salaries are 75000. Can the department stores : Namen and Roscoe be gulible, with this understanding of the unauthorized data? They definetly need to do some background research.
Futhermore, it is just an assumption made by the two stores that they can increase their profit of their company in this new suburb of Salem. They are no reasons that they can start a new stores in this suburb just beacsue, the business in one city, can be the true for the other suburb. They both differntial and cannot be compared. If the city of Winston has more highly sophisticated people, so Namen and Roscoe stores being good in their buisness, but the same does not work for the a suburb in salem, as there are no hypothesis that the median salary of Salem is of 75000 and that people are have known these stores.
The claim by the author is that people are willing to spend more money on clothing, Is that so? As, previsioulsy stated that people of the city of Winston are having a different lifestyle to that to compared with the people of the suburb in Salem. For instance, In basic city life, there are more parties and more of meeting to attended in regular basis, but, in a suburb lifestyle, people indeed have parties, but, not as much, as the population of the cities, the both vary in their different basis.
Namen's executives argue that as population and median income increase, people are willing to spend more money on clothing. However, Roscoe’s executives believe that the suburbs are more family oriented, and therefore their store will be more profitable than their competitor Namen. Thus, from the above it is clear that these statements cannot be true or false it depends on the people and their mindset. But for one, we know the people are definetly going to purchase from these stores, but, the two companies cannot increase their profit or the efficacy of their companies in the different place and expect the same outcome in the other place. Their claim cannot be undertaken into consideration as it does not give any evidence to the hypotheses, whether the two company will profit or it will be non profitable in a new suburb of Salem. Much more, of knowledge into the statistics should be considered before executing a plan.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 516 350
No. of Characters: 2395 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.766 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.641 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.373 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.897 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'answers'?
Suggestion: answers
...by the author, there are no substantial answer that this statement is true, whether th...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'store'?
Suggestion: store
...re no reasons that they can start a new stores in this suburb just beacsue, the busine...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...uisness, but the same does not work for the a suburb in salem, as there are no hypoth...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hypotheses', 'hypothesises'?
Suggestion: hypotheses; hypothesises
... the a suburb in salem, as there are no hypothesis that the median salary of Salem is of 7...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...end more money on clothing, Is that so? As, previsioulsy stated that people of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 28.8173652695 184% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 516.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80813953488 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49879932558 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422480620155 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 705.55239521 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.897203432 57.8364921388 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 5.70786347227 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179968721759 0.218282227539 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691489602922 0.0743258471296 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828056819687 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114663245536 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356091900143 0.0628817314937 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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