A nation should require all of its students to study the
same national curriculum until they enter college.
There has been a long standing debate about standardizing the curriculum so that every student gets the same amount of education going into college. I strongly agree on this front as I myself as a person felt this difference with my peers going into college. I was on the advantageous side relative to some people as well as on the disadvantageous side with respect to others. I would like to explain my stand on this with 2 reasons.
Firstly, Having non-standardized curriculum leaves a lot of bias/advantage to the students whose parents are well off as they can afford good and quality education and would love to see their children in schools that have superior curriculum. This not only gives a huge advantage to them going into college since they already have a headstart or got their basics right with few advanced topics compared with their counterparts who may not have had access/knowledge about those subjects. This also makes it easier for them by making their application strong thereby giving them a considerable boost to get into the top universities of the country whereas children who couldn't afford quality curriculum would be on the backseat with respect to college applications.
Secondly, Having the same national curriculum gives a chance to bring out the hidden talents in the country and thereby provide quality education to them through scholarships or subsidised education schemes. This would be possible since a standardized set of exams can be brought into place if all the students study the same curriculum which provides a common testing ground for all the students in the country thereby extracting the best talent irrespective of which school they've studied which is a reflective of their economic background of the family. For example, India has a standard curriculum for all the 11th and 12th grade students which makes it easier for them to hold common entrance exams to the elite institutes of the nation making it relatively fair for everyone in the country to get into those colleges.
Therefore , Inspite of how tough it is to standardize the curriculum for the whole nation, if we achieve to do that effectively , it helps us fight some societal challenges and give an equal and a fair chance to all the students of the nation to ensure quality education is reached to each and every family irrespective of their economic background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88879171065 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517676767677 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5166056124 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.0 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 5.21951772744 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201522505635 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754327327295 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587761191852 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124395248141 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608190251488 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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