A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

I agree with the recommendation made here. A country should teach its students same curriculum until college. Though I agree with this recommendation, there is still a scenario where I can see this as a disadvantage. Contrary to this there are many advantages too.

A nation is reflected by its youth. The students studying in a country is highly influenced by its cultural diversity and different religions. In order for a country to upbring a competent youth it should have its states to teach the same curriculum all over the nation. Different students have different calibers, they have their own set of limits to what extent one can comprehend the things that they are learning. In order to overcome this problem a country should present the same level of curriculum to all of its student, so that they can get to the same level, where they could compete with each other and try to give their best in their study.

This brings us to another advantage of having same curriculum. Students should atleast have some level of skills outside of their books. In order attain this a government should include some skill development programs, where students can learn their preffered skills and develop a sense of professionalism that one can't achieve solely through books. Students can choose their preffered sport, but should only play a sport of their choice, in order to stay fit physically.

A nation should not compromise to teach its students its history, the same histpry, no matter the state. One should know the history of thie nation. And the exposure of a nation's historical knoweldge is very important for its students, its youth. This is one of the biggest advantage of having same curriculum for all of the students.

But having same curriculum doesn't necessarily means that you should avoid teach the student their reespective regional language. In a nation like India, having various languages, where there exist no national language, it is very critical to teach the students their respective mother tounge. This can be treated has a disadvantage of having same curriculum, as a student not being able to properly learn the language that they have been speaking from their childhood, the language that their family speaks in their home.

A nation should indeed require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, because collgege is a very big thing compared to a school. A student should require to have a set of skills, a set of knowledge, and this all can be achieved by having same curriculum. It is also important for the mental health of a student, they should not feel fear of missing out, which one might feel if they have been properly exposed to certain degree of learning. But a student also should practice their prefferd sport and learn their respective language.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lop a sense of professionalism that one cant achieve solely through books. Students ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ory of thie nation. And the exposure of a nations historical knoweldge is very important ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...advantage of having same curriculum for all of the students. But having same curriculum...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...students. But having same curriculum doesnt necessarily means that you should avoid...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt and learn their respective language.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9539748954 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65692023848 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437238493724 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2547305178 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318674808019 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114747573126 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725512195238 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192268782211 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768606002067 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lop a sense of professionalism that one cant achieve solely through books. Students ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ory of thie nation. And the exposure of a nations historical knoweldge is very important ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...advantage of having same curriculum for all of the students. But having same curriculum...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...students. But having same curriculum doesnt necessarily means that you should avoid...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt and learn their respective language.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9539748954 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65692023848 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437238493724 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2547305178 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318674808019 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114747573126 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725512195238 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192268782211 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768606002067 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.