A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Educational curriculum is the basically the subjects and syllabus designed for students to take up in their course of study. As per the recommendation, a national curriculum must be established until the a student gets into college. In my opinion, I partial disagree to the recommendation.
The main reason for establishment of same national curriculum is to develope common ground among students for evaluation and testing. These common grounds of testing at the end of a students school life will help evalute the students learning and could serve as a entrance examination for colleges. This will reduce the stress of students for studying for multiple entrance examination. For example, high school students in India are burdened with preparation of their 12th grade exams as well as extrance level examinations for engineering and medical college like JEE and NEET exams. These stress to some extent could be avoided.
The national curriculum might have ill effects as well. As the saying goes, all students are different and every student has their own capacity. Hence, a bright student will face no challenges in same national curriculum cause the curriculum will be designed keeping the average student in consideration. In this situation, we will be restricting the exceptional mind to develope and showcase their talents. Hence multiple curriculum allows students and parents to choose from the available pool of curriculum as per the students intelect.
Providing a national curriculum will have a heavy toll on the parents pockets. The nation curriculum will be designed keeping a average students background in mind, hence the cost of books and tution fees might rises. This rise will harm the low income families. In cases where government is not providing with child care funds, the national curriculum will cost a lot for those of the low level of income families, and might result in high amounts of dropouts.
Though the recommendation of same national curriculum is in some way benificial to the students but not to the extent as expected. Hence multiple curriculum and the freedom to choose between the curriculum as per the students capability and fanancial situations of the family. Therefore multiple curriculum should be there instead of only one curriculum throughout the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29619565217 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91896780567 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1690989505 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.45 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256484165746 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926223734598 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546104959406 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160270093187 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298989447309 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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