A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
No i disagree with recommendation becaus it is not compulsary to student to study samenational curriculum until they enter college.
Each and every student is own idea and family dream so,could not say like that student studythe same nation curriculum until they enter college.we create a enviroment to all student are goand come in different country so we share over idea and comfortably leave with each other.
It is very necessary to colobrate with each other we develope owr nation and differenttechnology.We take a example of “SUNITA VILLIUMshe is a American scientist work inNASA’ basically she is a INDIANBut she complite study in USA.
So.it is not necessary to studay in own national Curriculum .but we devlope environment tostudent study with different country and devlope nation name and over parents name.
Also develope support position it is very advantageous for student.some time what happenstudent is intelligent but he/she not able to study well we develope some kind of facillity tostudent study well and he/she devlope over countryTo conclude “A nation should not require all of its student to study the same nationalcurriculum until they entre college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36559139785 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20336278389 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.931362588 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.6 118.986275619 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261658130024 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144992911158 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537774889726 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144992911158 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537774889726 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.1392134831 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 48.8420337079 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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