a nation should require all of its students to study the same national cirriculum until they enter college.write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

This statement argues that a state should enroll all of its young generations in school through the same education programme, all the way until university commences. I believe that there are great benefits by implementing so, but there are also restricting elements in adapting this rigorous and rigid education policy for all the students in the nation.

First of all, the author must have considered the advantages for doing so. When a nation with a large population are all entering the selection for higher education, it poses a large risk and difficulty for the exam board, the education governors, and the entire national future generations. By implementing an exact and appropriate education crriculum and general textbooks, the nation's young generations would be taking the same standardised examination with the generalised knowledge. The results and scores produced from the tests would then be much easier and risk-free to assess and allocate the appropriate and correct amounts of students to their appropriate levels of higher education institutes. One prominent example of this practice in real life is China's university level entrance exam, "Gao Kao", that has been implemented for many decades. Billions of students all over China each years takes this notoriously difficult and stressful exam for two days in June, and the Chinese universities will allocate their entrance level scores according to the performance of students each year. This way have been proven effective and successful, with many other Asian countries following its suit. Therefore, standardising the national cirriculum provides an advantage for students to enter university fairly and based on their own qualities.

Secondly, another advantage for nation-wide curriculum being unanimous is for the general education for the general population. For a country, education is one of the most essential policies for its future generation growth and long term success. As the United Nations set the sustainable development goals to be achieved in 2025, one of the goals is to achieve sufficient general levels of education for all. When the country enforces a similar standard of learning cirriculum throughout the nation, this ensures that the students, no matter what family background, financial status, or social hierachy they are in, will be able to recieve decent education. There have been many studies done by the United Nations and other non-governmental organisations, that the more general spread education is for the population, there is more potential for these educated people to live happily, create business opportunities, and educate their next generation for a better household, society, and world. When education is enforced by the government and people are generally educated, this would more likely to bring the people in poverty out of the poverty cycle. Therefore, providing a national curriculum that doesn't discriminate anyone, and teaches the same materials, will provide general education levels for a country, bring poverty eradication through education, and sustainably develop a nation.

Thirdly, although there are two great benefits, and that many of the nations in the world are following the standardised national cirriculum to select students for higher education university institutions, this policy might pose unfairness and prejudice on some students with less ability or other minority cultures. For example, if the learning material is standardised, the exams should be standardised too - time limits for the exam, the printed exam papers, the strict testing environments, etc. However, there are many people who has learning disabilites or difficulties, such as dyslexia, or simply not able to understand the complexity of integration and differentiation. By putting them into the same testing environments, the same requirements, and the same questions for other students puts them in a great disadvantage. Hence, the national cirriculum must be adaptable and flexible for students who has learning difficulties and disabilities, in order to fairly judge and choose students for university. For example, for the British A-Levels university examination, students are required to choose three to four subjects, with different difficulty levels. The subject tests are regulated and standardised across the world, but the students are free to choose which subject and what level of difficulty they wish to pursue. Also, students with learning disabilities are able to have extra time or special exam environments in order to accomondate them to perform the best they can.

Another restriction for creating a standardised national cirriculum would be the material chosen for the textbooks would generally be the dominant and mainstream cultures and literature. This would impede the flourish and development for the minority cultures and literature in this nation. However, this restriction would not be as prominent as a problem for the arts; because the scientific and methodological ways of science would be scrutinised and reviewed by peers and authority before being widely accepted and selected for the textbook. But the minority cultures would be jeopradised and not preserved as well. For example, the songs and stories, the poems and literature created by minority ethnicities and tribes in the Amazon is not chosen for the literature textbooks for Brazil, Argentina, or other countries that border the Amazon. These tribes are already in danger, and would be further diminished through not spreading its culture to the mainsteam society. By not learning these, this would be a loss to the humankind cultural treasures.

Therefore, I believe it is important for the national cirriculum to not only generally educate all, but to include all cultures and diversity as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 19.5258426966 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 53.0 14.8657303371 357% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 12.9106741573 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4934.0 2235.4752809 221% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 891.0 442.535393258 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53759820426 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.46348086051 4.55969084622 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00316131102 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 395.0 215.323595506 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443322109989 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1572.3 704.065955056 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 16.0 1.77640449438 901% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3691954085 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.515151515 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0303030303 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229494955895 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721178378613 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456168935927 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143675641755 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038422757012 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 231.0 100.480337079 230% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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