Curriculum is basically exhaustive set of subjects and areas, designed to provide necessary knowledge of pragmatic world to its user. Every nation should be considerate of all the pros and cons of its effect on students nation which designing it. I agree with author to some extent, that a common curriculum is required for by all students to study. However, I do not support the requirement of common curriculum, till complete school life.
Many courses offered by colleges are disparate. For example Mathematics and Biology, these two fields are completely unrelated fields. To pursue, Biology one does not have to be master of maths or have in depth knowledge of subject.
Common curriculum can be implemented till some class so that, elementary education should be imparted to all the students. From high school, a separate curriculum for specific would help understand the subject and their interest in particular field. Many countries are already following this, India is a good example of this. Indian curriculum is common till high school. After high school is broader 5 -6 . categories, such that specific education can be provided.
To sum up, elementary knowledge is required to sustain in utilitarian world, hence all students must have common curriculum up to or before high school. But, in order to pursue any field, a student should have in depth knowledge of that field hence exclusive study for that subject before entering college will make him prepare for imminent future in college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for example, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20081967213 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73176815777 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0908153701 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256989723876 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748762717849 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931055298863 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14642069406 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128139194991 0.0667264976115 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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