A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
A nation consists of number of states comprising various cultures and varieties of peoples. The development of a nation depends on its economy. The growth of its economy depends on the capability of its citizens to develop new ideas and its commercial and successful implementation. Hence the basic need for ones personal development is education. More you educate more is the chance of success. Though the professional specialization of a person comes from the higher study but the basics of his or her knowledge is broadly depends on the basis of high school education.
I do agree to the statement of the author regarding a centralised education system of a nation. Basically centralization creates a standardization of the way of study. Different state governments may have their local syllabus for the students. Syllabus impacts the quality of study to a great extent. Its formulation varies from person to person based on their expertise. But a single course structure irrespective of state or centralised curriculum will definitely maintain a single expertise for all sections.
Taking into instance in country like India there are various local schools and central schools in almost all cities and villages. The mode of communication in the local language makes it easier for a child to grasp the knowledge and to simulate it. But they fail to express those ideas when the competition is on a national platform. As every nation has a national language so it should be mandatory for every organisation to communicate in a single channel.
Another significant modification may be taken into consideration is a single entry level examination for each stream of higher study. This will judge the implementation capacity of the student in a national competition. It will be easier to grade every student of a nation.
Moreover, it will be a good decision to follow a single curriculum for the primary and high school students for the betterment of their performance. It will also increase the possibility of success in future endeavours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28813559322 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.11581920904 0.157235817809 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0960451977401 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0141242937853 0.0497285424764 28% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0536723163842 0.0444667217837 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138418079096 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0197740112994 0.0406280797675 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.14072578252 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.030933414821 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.141242937853 0.0997080785238 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225988700565 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00282485875706 0.0148568991511 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2043.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 332.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15361445783 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406626506024 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298192771084 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222891566265 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156626506024 0.132149295362 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14072578252 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 219.290929204 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 56.4305260915 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8095238095 23.380412469 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.378833147 59.4972553346 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 23.380412469 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 45.628800918 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.43076923077 1.64882698954 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452246816876 0.391690518653 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121467203496 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103284034791 0.077325440228 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519666151573 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131443994384 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168881018038 0.161403998019 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811550352588 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331146473774 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0856818313731 0.0692045440612 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288589626617 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051640839805 0.0653680567796 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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