People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Perfect decision always leads to perfect solution.Though this statement seems to be true but having a proper decision is quite difficult. Life always pretends to be so confusing for every human being. For every work or every initiative they want to start with they have to decide whether its a good deal or not. A decision towards the progress of an assignment may take us either to a life full of joy and luxury or deep in the sea of sadness.So it plays a quite crucial role to decide what to do and what not to.
In assertion to the statement given by the author, various factors whether that may be hypothetical or practical motivates towards the final decision. One will definitely agree that "Emotion" leads the list. May it be a case of love or marriage or carrier or education its the personal weakness that leads towards an option that we want irrespective of its effectiveness.
We may take a case of a youth may be in the age group of thirteen to nineteen. In this teen age its the emotion that will drag that person towards various other ways of enjoying the life like watching movies, going in trips, late night return, weakness towards junk foods etc. There is no doubt that these are the way to be happy temporarily. But actually they are the distracting acts. In spite of going with the emotion, as a student one should concentrate in study during this age. Rather after doing these odd things if the result is poor then arguing that no matter, we are enjoying life is quite unfit.\
Proving the decision evolved from emotion from logical point of view is definitely a funny matter to discuss. Every mother loves her child. But it does not mean that he is the superhero and can pass every hurdles of the life.
So no doubt emotion plays a crucial factor in proper decision making but giving priority to these things is definitely not acceptable. life is full of challenge. In every moment we will mired by obstacles full of odds. But its the analysis of the problem that a veteran do for deciding whether to proceed or not.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'no doubt', 'in spite of', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236180904523 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.153266331658 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.072864321608 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0527638190955 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452261306533 0.0444667217837 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125628140704 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0376884422111 0.0406280797675 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60989341356 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0376884422111 0.030933414821 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123115577889 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226130653266 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100502512563 0.0148568991511 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2056.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 367.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60217983651 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294277929155 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223433242507 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133514986376 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0762942779292 0.132149295362 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60989341356 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506811989101 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 54.2123873524 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3157894737 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3345368029 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.210526316 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.6591137244 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.59 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590851926424 0.391690518653 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105621831074 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0654336537636 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504675949916 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126174405017 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242488017157 0.161403998019 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219655605655 0.0892212321368 25% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302082597655 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0451654286536 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402112309071 0.275328986314 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133710502022 0.0653680567796 20% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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