Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Every nation is predominantly a combination of variety number of social cultures. Its proper management and growth depends on an effective governance. He basic objective of a good ministry is to maintain the reputation of the nation to a distinguishable position. This is possible if there is a consistency in the economic growth of it. This is a quite important factor which briefly depends on the gross domestic product,the inflation rate of its currency, the repo rate of its financial institutions and moreover its taxation system. No matter how much tax is being deposited it is the amount that is spent for the implementation of the plans decides the development rate of the society.
For every sort of growth whether that may be economical, social and educational or whatever it may be a working plan is required for it. The organisation of the plan requires technology, manpower and moreover huge financial assistance funded by the authority. The execution of the paln depend on the infrastructure of the place where the intended project is required to be initiated. It is obvious that major cities of a nation are able to provide those requisites as per the demand.
The more the growth of the infrastructure, more will be the inflow of citizens from all the parts of the nation. It will ultimately increase the chance of meeting persons of various society and cultural believes. Whether it may be industrial growth or a boost in tourism or a open economy for various manufacturers, combinely it decides the per capita income of the peoples. As a result that place is a matter of attraction for juggernauts all over the world. .
So in assertion to the statement given it is quite obvious that cities with modish economical opportunities are the center of nation’s cultural relations.It may created with a exclusive working environment provided by the employer.It may be preserved with formation of monuments describing the day to day living of its citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['briefly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'sort of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257062146893 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.127118644068 0.157235817809 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104519774011 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0225988700565 0.0497285424764 45% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0423728813559 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14406779661 0.12292977631 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0367231638418 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14971340396 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.155367231638 0.0997080785238 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197740112994 0.0249443105267 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141242937853 0.0148568991511 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1979.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 328.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03353658537 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390243902439 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301829268293 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225609756098 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161585365854 0.132149295362 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14971340396 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521341463415 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.3673070366 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3196940764 59.4972553346 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6875 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 50.6829268293 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.27941176471 1.64882698954 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238105379278 0.391690518653 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990380704482 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694239872632 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558738364041 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224146731753 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109011034685 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664021496969 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.53166217665 0.385218514788 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0896964694004 0.0692045440612 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192649132081 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374483252054 0.0653680567796 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.