Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

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Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

Education may be regarded as the backbone of a child.Whether it may be in the form of a scheduled syllabus or through the family, whatever the medium it is,education is the only skill that makes a proper and mannered human being. Their is no limitation to the vast delivery of education. It is the tool that converts a human being into a social and responsible one. The process of getting educated never ends till the death.

According to the author the main idea of being educated lies in being a moral personnel. So basically its the way of teaching that plays the deciding role in the personality development of the person. Its the type of education only that results into creating the discussion about the impact of teaching morality in the system. It is obvious that the morality of teaching is not at all an avoidable thing in creating an efficient and smart student. But this is not enough. The importance of being educated definitely lies in the capability of solving the puzzle of life.

Definitely the mismatches between being a literate person and an educated person play a major role in deciding the future of a student. By getting good percentage in the exam one can get a good salary in a established company. but to remain their and to maintain the position what required is the reasoning of problem solving.

With my context its the logical definition of a problem and thinking for the solution by taking into consideration all the effecting scenarios is practically accepted as an educated person. We may take example of successful persons like Einstein, Faradey, Grahambell whoever it may be, its their ability to think the problem practically and to get the solution logically, for which they are memorable till now in our society.So its the deciding factor of being succeed in life.Hence if the teaching is strong to create a logic then the person will never fail.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21613832853 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.167146974063 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0749279538905 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0432276657061 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0489913544669 0.0444667217837 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138328530259 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0778097982709 0.0406280797675 192% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.78886373757 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201729106628 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.158501440922 0.0997080785238 159% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172910662824 0.0249443105267 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172910662824 0.0148568991511 116% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1891.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 325.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81846153846 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350769230769 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295384615385 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224615384615 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113846153846 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78886373757 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 53.0813060208 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6666666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9104117653 59.4972553346 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.066666667 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.2051282051 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.64882698954 101% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271872133194 0.391690518653 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138393201946 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0954204335958 0.077325440228 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615003684206 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181365951738 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133298368541 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708413687238 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.52656300799 0.385218514788 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0661443889302 0.0692045440612 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197555023822 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599654205204 0.0653680567796 92% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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