A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author of the statement claim that there should be only one curriculum for the entire nation until the students enter colleges. Many of us will argue that the statement will hold all the time. While others will argue against the statement by providing the examples. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Education is a tool through which, a nation would nurture their childer for the future. Through education, anyone can change their future. So, the government should try that it should reach to each and everyone and in the best way possible. Although there is could be any number of methods which will be considered as good and the same curriculum is one of them.
By providing the same curriculum to all the students of the nation at the school level would help the government to bring the equity among the students from the different background, religion or color and leads to end of discrimination in the education system, for example, in India, if explore the education system at the school, then you find that there is huge gap in the students from the private school as compared to the student from the government school. So, if there would be the same curriculum among all the nation the students at the government school in India will also get benefit from this step.
But the issue with this is that the teacher has to upgrade themselves as per the curriculum set by the government, for example, if the government decide to eliminate some of the subject or thing that it is not as effective as it should or want to bring some new subject in the curriculum then the teachers have to adjust themselves accordingly.
Another issue with this is that we are forcing the students to study want the government wants to study not as per their desire and this will also create an impact on the religious school where the students are being taught about the religion and the principle of their religion before proceeding further to the other subject. One more issue is of the language that is in what language the curriculum has to carried out, for example, in a country like India where are have 100s of languages are there, it will difficult to decide which one should be selected.
In sum, as we know that every coin has two sides, the claim of the author to have, from one side it will look good as it can bring the revolution in the education system of any nation and from another side it can create many problems as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t the statement will hold all the time. While others will argue against the statement...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...n the best way possible. Although there is could be any number of methods which wi...
^^
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or and leads to end of discrimination in the education system, for example, in In...
^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the student from the government school. So, if there would be the same curriculum amon...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her has to upgrade themselves as per the curriculum set by the government, for ex...
^^
Line 13, column 168, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., if the government decide to eliminate some of the subject or thing that it is not as effe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that it is not as effective as it should or want to bring some new subject in the...
^^
Line 17, column 469, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...mple, in a country like India where are have 100s of languages are there, it will di...
^^^^
Line 21, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s we know that every coin has two sides, the claim of the author to have, from o...
^^
Line 21, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sides, the claim of the author to have, from one side it will look good as it ca...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65924276169 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43142669122 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418708240535 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.442772279 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.428571429 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0714285714 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23159864865 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849001733877 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799568940123 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110233286845 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519755953244 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.