the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
The author of the statement stated that the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Many will argue that it holds all the time. while others will counter by providing the example. In my essay, I will provide sound reasoning in the support of the statement.
In universities and colleges, sport and social activities should be a very crucial part of their curriculum along with the studies, as this would not only help the student in their physical and mental growth but also they will understand their responsibilities toward the society. And the combination of studies with social and sports activities will create the essence of changing the world through their knowledge of all the fields.
Moreover, As we know everybody cannot be the same, some may good in studies while others in sport or any other activity. It will be beneficial for those who want to opt for a career in sports or any social activities if universities will providing good facilities and financial supports in the field of sports and social activity.
In today's world where technology is evolving at a very high pace, which causes the students to play games on mobile or on the internet as they will get a variety of games with great features and functionalities. Another problem is because of development work and construction, children are not getting enough space to play outside as there is a lack of playground left. So, it will be beneficial for students if colleges and universities provide facilities for sports.
In addition to it, the universities should also focus on social activities because it is equally important for the student to understand how they help the needy one and find out the solutions for the problems of the societies. And if the university provides these facilities then they can take part actively in these activities
So, it will be a good initiative, if the universities and schools invest money in the sport and social activities as these will help the student overall development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... will argue that it holds all the time. while others will counter by providing the ex...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will argue that it holds all the time. while others will counter by providing the ex...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... social activities if universities will providing good facilities and financial supports ...
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Line 13, column 344, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun playground seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of playgrounds'.
Suggestion: a lack of playgrounds
...nough space to play outside as there is a lack of playground left. So, it will be beneficial for stu...
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Line 17, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n take part actively in these activities So, it will be a good initiative, if the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07428571429 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84798675759 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2340680804 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.615384615 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362147594629 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139258302407 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21638966413 0.0737576698707 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19496760799 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128790269211 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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