A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until the enter college. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Whether a nation should have all of its students to take the same curriculum during the beginning of their education and for how long has been a topic long discussed. Doing so have its own benefits and drawbacks. Requiring all the students to take the same curriculum can certainly simplify the education system and make the administration of standardized test easier. However, such an approach would necessarily hinder the development of unique talents. In my opinion, education should have standardized portion, but a nation should also strive to provide its students with personalized education if it has the resources.
That a student would benefit from curriculum tailored to his or she personal demands is unreputable. Since every child is unique, every child will have a different curriculum that best suit his or her need. For example, a student who shows strong interest and talent in drawing would benefit from more advanced art class instead of math or biology. On the other hand, a student who is good at designing and three dimensional visalization should be encourage to spend time tinkering instead of being forced to do literature analysis. When class are tailored to a student's interest and gift, the student would have a better chance of realizing his or her full potential; if standard curriculum is enforced, the student's time and energy will be unwisely used, and the student's chance of future success will be considerably diminished. It is in the student's and the society's best interest to have nonstandard curriculum.
However, there are also certain drawbacks to providing students with personalized education. The first thing is complexity. In order to provide students with curriculum that best fit their needs, every student's interest and talents have to be carefully analyzed, their schedule planned, and the right instructors will have to be invited. This is considerable amount of effort. In addtion to making the operation of institutes considerably more arduous, the personalized education will also bring trouble to the standardized tests. Because students could be taking wildly different classes, creating a standardized test to evaluate the merits of students will be much harder. Granted, the standardized test should focus on a student's ability instead of their knowledge, but it nontheless need to assume a shared knowledge base to create problems everyone could understand. As beneficial as personalized education are, it would bring about a lot of complexity.
As shown in the previous two paragraphs, personalized education have both benefits and drawback. Balancing the benefits of personalized class and the complexity it brings is difficult, and the best solution will inevitably varies from case to case. in my opinion, a nation should strive to provide its students with personalized education when it have the power to do so, but it would also need to enforce certain standardized curriculum so that it could create standardized test that is so import to the admission process. If a country is having problem providing its population electricity, then it is probably a bad idea to spend it resource on providing tailored curriculum. But it nation do have the resource to provide tailor education, than the nation should do so.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...hree dimensional visalization should be encourage to spend time tinkering instead of bein...
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Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...sional visalization should be encourage to spend time tinkering instead of being forced ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...if standard curriculum is enforced, the students time and energy will be unwisely used, ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the best'.
Suggestion: societys the best
...minished. It is in the students and the societys best interest to have nonstandard curriculum...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...iculum that best fit their needs, every students interest and talents have to be careful...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...the standardized test should focus on a students ability instead of their knowledge, but...
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Suggestion:
...ficial as personalized education are, it would bring about a lot of complexity. ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'vary'
Suggestion: vary
..., and the best solution will inevitably varies from case to case. in my opinion, a nat...
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Suggestion: In
...ll inevitably varies from case to case. in my opinion, a nation should strive to p...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...nts with personalized education when it have the power to do so, but it would also n...
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...e resource to provide tailor education, than the nation should do so.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234265734266 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.178321678322 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0856643356643 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472027972028 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048951048951 0.0444667217837 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0821678321678 0.12292977631 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0559440559441 0.0406280797675 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98871916779 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041958041958 0.030933414821 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00174825174825 0.0016655270985 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.041958041958 0.0249443105267 168% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013986013986 0.0148568991511 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3284.0 2732.02544248 120% => OK
No of words: 523.0 452.878318584 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27915869981 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407265774379 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326959847036 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.267686424474 0.200843997647 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162523900574 0.132149295362 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98871916779 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44741873805 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7852563179 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7916666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0238672123 59.4972553346 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7916666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.4876513703 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.35668789809 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425942777789 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0970793765454 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763837593971 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47338006965 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163058747873 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170528018101 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110169020669 0.0892212321368 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.418874742775 0.385218514788 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.072186556142 0.0692045440612 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335098237357 0.275328986314 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570713234523 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.