A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

The students are one of the most important assets of a nation - the future of the nation depends upon the progress and education of students. There are 1000's of schools across the nation, which up till the 10th grade teach a students a fairly similar variety of subjects which include the basic sciences, social studies, mathematics and environmental studies.

If the there is huge variation in the subjects that are taught in the various schools, it may be so, that students of one school may not be compatible with the others in case of academic background, so if these students with varied level of specific knowledge, happen to join the same college, it may happen so, that one student may grasp the subjects of the college faster and better than another student in comparison, who might have a great acumen, but due to the wanting of the basics required for the particular college subject, he might face a problem learning or grabbing concepts.

To achieve a highly standardized education system, all schools in the nation must follow a common curriculum. This will help in eradicating the learning problem faced by students who may have not studied the rudimentary concepts required for a particular college subject in whilst they were in school.

Another benefit would be that students can be fairly selected for higher studies - that is, just based on their merit or their rank in state or nation. This is possible because of the standardization. If the all students have been taught the same syllabus through their school days, then judging the student academically would be very fair as compared to when curriculum differ from state to state.

In conclusion, standardization of the study curriculum should be done nation-wide in order to have a better student progress and to allow the nation to progress as a whole. Thus, a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...ion, which up till the 10th grade teach a students a fairly similar variety of subjects wh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239436619718 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.138028169014 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0788732394366 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478873239437 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0253521126761 0.0444667217837 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132394366197 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0422535211268 0.0406280797675 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71517310792 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253521126761 0.030933414821 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135211267606 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0394366197183 0.0249443105267 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169014084507 0.0148568991511 114% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1955.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 328.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96036585366 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384146341463 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283536585366 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182926829268 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823170731707 0.132149295362 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71517310792 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 219.290929204 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 55.7820498322 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.8 23.380412469 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 139.96699611 59.4972553346 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.5 141.124799967 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 23.380412469 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.674092028746 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 61.1536585366 51.4728631049 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.96 1.64882698954 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464983116974 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151077950807 0.123202303941 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888865812557 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.715214634859 0.547984918172 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187495100377 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251925739324 0.161403998019 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242236040676 0.0892212321368 272% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329753693697 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878666090792 0.0692045440612 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303395408192 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183852946963 0.0653680567796 281% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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