"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college".
The statement "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college" is certainly a complex and controversial statement. I partially agree and disagree with this statement. I provide my reasons, examples and evidence in support of my point of view in the following paragraphs.
Technically speaking the education system in India is only focusing on bookish learning and not on the other aspects of education.Basically education should build up the children to develop their creative and imaginative sense. Unfortunately, our educational system builds up the memory power and IQ level of the student.The designers of the educational system pattern
concentrated on the aspects of ameliorating the children's growth is to improve the memory power.
In Consolidation of my point of view:
Why i agree with the statement?
As the statements describes that all the students of the nation should require the same national curriculum until they enter college is appreciable because in order to grade the students based on their skill and knowledge,this system plays a crucial role. Grading every individual based on the same platform is more appreciable than grading them based on the multiple platforms and analyzing their level of perception towards their knowledge. For example, consider a scenario where an admission test for class 11 which consists of topics like mathematics, physics and chemistry.And students from different boards of educational system are taking part in this system.And now the problem is a "SSC" educational system student can perform very well in mathematics than any other board and "CBSE" and "ICSE" can perform very well on physics and chemistry compared to any other. Now the evaluator finds it difficult to select students based on their performance.So it is partially agreeable with the given statement.
Why i disagree with above statement?
In the statement it suggests to have a same national curriculum for students until they enter college is seems to controversial and it is not appreciable when students who are willing to develop their skills in a particular data science or field is restricted and confined to boundaries. Because of this curriculum they to concentrate equally on all other subjects and now he cannot ameliorate in his favorite field to explore and learn new interesting concepts in it.For example, a survey showed that students who are very much interested in biological sciences ended by doing mathematics degree because of his knowledge or level of perception in biological sciences are confined because of having the same curriculum for students all over the nation.
Conclusion:
As i have provided irrefutable evidence in support of my point of view, i conclude my argument reiterating that statement "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college" is partially acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2556.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49677419355 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2073637669 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460215053763 0.4932671777 93% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.171792744 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.571428571 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2142857143 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491400130407 0.243740707755 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178546696125 0.0831039109588 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242155845888 0.0758088955206 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191868524264 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227770934848 0.0667264976115 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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