I agree with issue which states that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Students are future of our national, so it is required that their curriculums are same in nation.
In nation there are many people whose jobs are not steady. They require to go any area of nation for earning money. At that time if all schools have same curriculum then it is easy for their children to joint school and start their education. I all schools have their own curriculum that it is difficult for students to start their education which is different from the early curriculum. To avoid this problem all schools have same curriculum in nation.
After completion of schools, all students want to study in best college. Most of college take entrance exam and students who pass their exam have opportunity to study in that college. But if all schools have different curriculum then the importance of entrance exam is decrease because some students already study the topic of entrance exam in school and some do not study because of this problem i agree with this issue.
Also if all schools have same curriculum then it is easy to find which students are brilliant and which students are poor in study. If all schools have different curriculum then their exams are also different and it is possible that some schools set curriculum easy for students and some schools set curriculum hard for students.
So that impact on result of students. The college which give admission according to the result of students, then it so difficult for college because it is possible that some students are brilliant but their results are not good because their exams are hard.
In conclusion, I agree with this issue because of several reasons which I explain above. Because of all schools have same curriculum, all students study about the all states and history of our nation. It is possible that if nation give permission to all state to set their curriculum, then they set curriculum which contain information about only its state. All students require to know the information about our nation, their history, different state any their culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...whose jobs are not steady. They require to go any area of nation for earning money. A...
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Suggestion: in the best
... of schools, all students want to study in best college. Most of college take entrance ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me do not study because of this problem i agree with this issue. Also if all s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...his problem i agree with this issue. Also if all schools have same curriculum the...
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...hools set curriculum hard for students. So that impact on result of students. The colle...
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Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...ut only its state. All students require to know the information about our nation, their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94070080863 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47673256487 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358490566038 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7621118009 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434989282022 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187753886365 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174681518172 0.0758088955206 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28526860713 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23232958464 0.0667264976115 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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