A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

While if the students throughout the country study same national curriculum until they enter college, every student in a country gets equal opportunities to develop their skills and are measured by same standards. Following same national curriculum also helps students to get broader knowledge and overview of all states of the country. But, such a practice doesn’t help students to indulge in gaining profound native knowledge pertaining to their own region.
Firstly, the basic responsibility of educational system is to impart its students the skill of reading, writing and speaking to communicate with people around them and gain knowledge from their surroundings. But, national curriculum of many countries doesn’t include native language as a compulsory subject. So, students who study national curriculum cannot write and read their own mother tongue, they can only speak. To exemplify, in India the national curriculum includes Hindi and English languages and doesn’t include any language of its state. Hence, particularly in Southern India, where each state has a specific native language, the students cannot read their native newspapers, books and even names of shops, roads written in native language.
Secondly, but in this modern world, every country has itinerant families, staying in one state for few years and then shifting to other state as parents of the families get transferred from state to state. For example in India military families cannot stay continuously more than 5-6 years in a state, because the parents who do military jobs often get transferred from a state to other state in mid of an academic year. In such circumstances the kids of these families can continue their education without dropping an academic year in schools of any state which follow same national curriculum.
Thirdly, generally in designing the national curriculum highly talented, intelligent experts having different perspectives about the process of development of students are employed by government of any country. The outcome of such collaborations lead to well organised programs in educational system which indulge broader perspective helping overall development of students. Like, in India the national curriculum has emphasis on various sports and personality development to enhance the physical strength and mental strength of students. The various extra – curricular activities included in the national curriculum like debates, dance competitions, seminar competitions, martial - arts competitions helps students to develop their creativity, spontaneous nature and intuition. If all schools of a country employs such a well - developed system and if government continuously monitors the implementation of these methods and progress of schools, such a process can build strong foundation of development of the country as today’s students are tomorrow’s citizens of the country. If different states employ different curriculum, the monitoring of schools becomes difficult task for the government and these schools may not employ effective methods for overall development of students. Like in various schools of Telugu states of India has emphasis on only IIT- JEE coaching, medicine coaching and their programs doesn’t really include sports.
To conclude, implementation of same national curriculum helps in developing effective educational programs, but such a curriculum should also include emphasis on important native knowledge and teach native language. In this way students can get broader exposure and can also understand the values of their native cultures and it helps them to gain knowledge from their surroundings.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3144.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 547.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74771480804 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03037969856 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469835466179 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 963.9 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6325765306 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.2 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.35 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183382063833 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702304855976 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567766401869 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116203374268 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550012963258 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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