A Nation Should Require All Of Its Students To Study The Same National Curriculum
The issue that all of the students of a nation should study the same curriculum until they enter college is a contentious one. I believe that the students should be given the choices and options in curriculum, i.e flexible curriculum, because every student won't be having same interests and goals. And if the students are forced to study the same curriculum then, there may be waste of money and time. Moreover, this may lead to the downfall of students, he/she may fail in subjects in which they have no interest, if they are forced to study them.
Firstly, unlike olden days, people now have different interests and career goals. Students should have latitude in choosing their subjects depending on their interests. Then, they will succeed in their lives. If the nation necessiates the student to follow the same curriculum, students have to study the subjects, in which they have no interest. Like, if one want to become a doctor then, he should not be forced to study the engineering subjects like Mathematics and Physics.
Secondly, even though students are forced to study the same curriculum, money and time will be wasted. And this in not good for a nation. If students have autonomy, then many resources won't be wasted and this will benefit a nation.
Thirdly, if the students are forced to study same subjects, then they may fail in those subjects, and these fiascos may hinder their career graph and precludes them from achieving their goals. Unfortunately, they may get depression and this may lead to their downfall.
Some may argue that a student should study some important subjects, but that should be upto certain standards.
In conclusion, as students have different interests and goals, there may be waste of resources like money and time, and students may fail in some subjects, in which they are not interested and they may get depression which may cause their downfall, i don't agree with this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
The issue that all of the students of a nation should study the s...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...may lead to their downfall. Some may argue that a student should study some import...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ssion which may cause their downfall, i dont agree with this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97538461538 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53807176495 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424615384615 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6929244032 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2986753601 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138034914586 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124140700523 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186871317429 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113634206269 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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