Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
The issue that the laws and the legal system can not change the problems of modern society is a debatable one. I agree with this because laws won't change people permanently if they are like this from centuries, even if laws managed to change them, the change will be ephemeral and the problems will be relapsed, and to change them permanently, awareness programmes and education are needed.
Firstly, consider the modern India, open defecation is still a problem there. If the government passed a law to prevent it, this problem will be solved permanently. But, some still defecate during times, because they are like this from way back, when no one is present. And as government can not check every place, this problem will relapse after sometime.
Secondly, consider the plastic problem, people stopped using the plastic, for its unavailability because of the ban. In India, the laws will be strict initially and after sometime, they will become effete. So, plastic will become available, people will begin using it.
Finally, this is also the case for deforestation and pollution problems, and laws and the legal system cannot solve them permanently. Hence, to solve them completely, awareness programmes are necessary. These programmes are successful in India. consider the "Swatch Bharat " programme of Modi, which succeeded in solving the open defecation in many areas in India.
Some argue that the felonies like Rapes and murders can be diminished by bringing stringent laws. But this is not applicable to every problem.
Hence, i believe that laws and legal system cannot solve problems completely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25670498084 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64831067275 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0509410261 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338106560098 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117261414011 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115431739682 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193949025532 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121576565984 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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