To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The issue that one must study the cities of a society to understand its most important traits and characteristics is a debatable one. In the past, when there were no facilities to commute, people tend to stay in their own places. So, at that time one could understand the characteristics of a society by simply studying its cities. But in modern era, this is not sufficient, for cities now have different people came from different parts of the country. And people in the cities doesn't practice customs and traditions of their society. Actually, to understand the most important characteristics, one has to study its villages rather than its cities alone because the traits and characteristics are preserved in villages only.
Firstly, present cities have people who came from various societies. For example, consider the, Garden city of India, Bangalore. In this city, you find people speaking different languages like Telugu, Tamil, and having different personalities and lifestyles. These people migrated to Bangalore for Employment from other states like Andhra Pradesh, Tamilnadu. So, they have different customs and traditions, which makes difficult to understand the important characteristics of its society.
Secondly, people in cities will not practice their traditions and customs because they are busy in their careers and they don’t have time, like in the past, to follow them. For example, consider the Pongal festival, ancient people celebrated this differently compared to modern people because they have necessary resources which the modern people cannot obtain.
Thirdly, people in the villages preserve the traits and characteristics of their society compared to the people in cities. Although there are less people in villages now because of migration, one can find their traditions whenever they visit the villages.
But as the popular dictum goes, “When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do.” It means City of Rome reflects the characteristics of Roman society. It is true in the past. But now, when you look at the people of Rome, City of Rome constitutes the people of various societies. So, it is difficult to understand the characteristics of its societies by studying its cities only.
In conclusion, I agree that the studying of cities helps in understanding of their societies, but only partially. To fully understand, one must study villages not cities only.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34645669291 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96837049578 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438320209974 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6374591508 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291846037562 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114266049663 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153983527629 0.0758088955206 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167008621311 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144243049315 0.0667264976115 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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