A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Essay topics:

A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

School level students are young and only few among them have natural inclination to anything in particular. Additionally, only few among them tend to pursue their inclinations as a career path. Education is important in a sense that it not only prepares students for a career but also shapes their attitude, enhances their knowledge and builds them up for a bright and prosperous future.

School level education prepares students in a way that they are the jack of all trade but master of none. It provides them with the basics of what is required in the long run. As mentioned above, since students at young age hardly have any idea of what they are better suited to do or what they could excel at, it would be imprudent to develop curriculum for individual students as they could have a change of plan or heart in the future and may not pursue the same path that they have been trained for. So, a single national curriculum the exposes students to the basics of education is a better idea. This way they will have an idea about all the possibilities they could choose or adopt when they have a better understanding of things, which could be in college level.

In college, specialized courses could be made available so that students can hone their desired career pursuit. A national curriculum incorporating the essential courses that develops students intellectually, physically, morally and socially is well suited at school level. For example, in Nepal there is a single national curriculum for school level students. Until they complete their School Leaving Certificate exams, all the students are required to adhere to the same curriculum. The curriculum is intended to expose students to wide array of subjects like Math, Science, English, Computers, Accounts, etc. Also, emphasis is given to extracurricular activities to allow students to play with their interests and their strengths. This way, students will have a better sense of what to choose as their next step in college.

So, a national curriculum covering the important aspects for school level students is a better idea.

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Average: 6 (2 votes)
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in particular']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255208333333 0.238963963785 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.145833333333 0.154291517835 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859375 0.0886310499679 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0506014161523 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0449626384858 139% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1171875 0.123526278965 95% => OK
Participles: 0.03125 0.0379742944744 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74926239034 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338541666667 0.0316879551592 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00260416666667 0.0014075125626 185% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0950106342287 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260416666667 0.0245489744465 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182291666667 0.0157978311181 115% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2099.0 2899.98275862 72% => OK
No of words: 349.0 478.390804598 73% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01432664756 6.0591788892 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.65681771538 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358166189112 0.369966551584 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252148997135 0.285172536893 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214899713467 0.207245337619 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10888252149 0.136322040163 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74926239034 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 234.298850575 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478510028653 0.492565540709 97% => OK
Word variations: 49.3801901896 56.8184620615 87% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 21.1264367816 76% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8125 23.7468607788 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1508520305 62.0618507366 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1875 143.81877709 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 23.7468607788 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.728815259664 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.71264367816 0% => OK
Readability: 47.0273997135 52.2641144681 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.61458333333 1.64547068916 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331307928693 0.39480681544 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152791267685 0.11556216369 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0523545391398 0.0736162880345 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552227375907 0.531340600358 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161255346707 0.15197228837 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142931246849 0.158818324754 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836814741195 0.0851127212816 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.318642658431 0.388921930462 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107230180052 0.0677916285025 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210213994249 0.28015025965 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114375001791 0.0610219844235 187% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.8591954023 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30459770115 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.96264367816 101% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.10632183908 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.93390804598 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.04597701149 98% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 15.0862068966 93% => OK

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.5 Out of 6