A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A common curriculum till college allows institutions of higher studies to be able to make their own curriculum much more efficient as everyone coming to that particular college will have the same knowledge base.This also allows the colleges to monitor what kind of topics or areas are covered during the lower stages of the students education, allowing them decide what to include or not to include in their very own curriculum.
The major problem with not having a common syllabus is that each student has a different knowledge base. This causes for certain students to be knowledgeable in certain areas and lack any foundation in other topics or areas. For example, in technical education such as engineering, the students coming from different educational backgrounds will not have the same knowledge base on topics such as math, physics,etc. Some may have better knowledge in physics but lack the necessary skills in math or vice versa. Also streams such as engineering have subjects or topics which is interdependent,i.e.,knowledge or skills in certain subjects will be required to learn or understand other subjects,hence everything is interwoven together.Thus students having different knowledge bases will make the teaching by the higher education institutions more difficult, as they have to spend a considerable amount of time and energy to bring each and every student on to the same level. This hinders the pace at which a student learns and hence increases the time required for a person to gain a complete higher education.
The curriculum followed can be broadly differentiated into different streams or areas such as science,arts,commerce,etc. But each area of expertise should have only one set of curriculum, and not more than that. This allows the students to take whatever stream their are interested in but each student of that particular stream will have the same foundation that enbles for an easier higher education for the students as well as the institutes.
Thus having a common curriculum in the nation allows for easier and faster higher education for the students and also enables for a better and easier teaching environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26011560694 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28440710241 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465317919075 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.678363058 60.3974514979 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.454545455 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4545454545 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157168824948 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624641954865 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322548770322 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102642096034 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.009829423034 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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