A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education has always been the hot button topic.There is always conversation going on about various education policy. The question whether all students in one country should follow same curriculum, is one that is debated quite often. However before adopting such policy one must thouroughly analyze the consequences of the aforementioned policy. I, for one, agree with the statment that all student in one nation should study the same curriculum until they enter college.
The first and most important advantage will be that, it will provide a same and universal measuring stick to gauge the academic competance of student. Lets consider the education scenario in India. Each state has its own curriculum. Although STEM subjects do not bear much difference, same cannot be said for the history and language. Consequently each state has its own examination method and grading system. This makes evaluating student very hard, when they apply for colleges. The reason is simple, the measuring stick is different. Measuring stick is reference to grading system.The universal curriculum will be helpful in this regard.
Also second important point is, It will easier for students to prepare for college. Expanding on the point from previous paragraph,by the student graduate from school, they will have reaslised their affinity towards a particular field. They will be better prepared for it. Lets consider the example of Indian Education sytem again. Each state has its own curriculum. By the time student from different state curriculum graduate, they have false sense of their competency. A student from more forgiving curriculum may feel they are really good in a subejct, where in reality It might be far from the truth. Vice versa of this example is also valid. The universal curriculum will be good for students themselves to decide where they stand and how good they really are in something.
Although there will be many refuting the policy. However they will be unbale to come up with any cogent argument.One argument is that why should student from one state should learn about geography and history of other state and what good is it? But this argument does not hold any water, since the one curriculum wi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19498607242 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61763753943 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532033426184 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7921332334 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7083333333 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9583333333 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209124460245 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643491890346 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813353924885 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12894586005 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546264280334 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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