A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Standard curriculum should be followed in schools as they give the students basic knowledge of all the subjects. following an exhaustive curriculum helps in preparing a student mentally to face the vagaries of life by making sure that no one goes through a shock when entering college after school. knowledge of different disciplines give students a better perspective of what to do in life and choose their majors wisely.
Studying different subjects like history which talks about the different emperors that ruled the world and their impact on the society, Chemistry which talks about how different reactions take place in nature, Physics which tells us in which direction we should apply force to initiate movement of block easily, Political Science which tells us about the laws present in our constitution and our fundamental rights, Geography which provides us with information about different topographies,climatic conditions etc helps in broadening one's understanding of the world. students would not feel alienated when they would interact with students of other colleges as they would have similar kind of aptitude.
following a stringent curriculum does not allow precocious talents to fulfill their potentials as they are bound to study the same subject as their peers which might be inadequate to satiate their needs. There is a possibility that someone is weak in Mathematics but is compelled to study it in order to meet the passing requirements would develop hatred for the subject and his/her interest in other subjects might decline as well. To counter such a problem the course curriculum should be divided into two parts- one to meet the requirements of prodigies and one to address the students on the other part of the spectrum.schools should organize remedial classes to enhance academic performance of weaker students and extra classes should be conducted on weekends to prepare talented students for competing on a global scale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33225806452 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92547211519 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.004592412 60.3974514979 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.625 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.75 23.4991977007 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199130295625 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955480441591 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583906937176 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13486142739 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506336919883 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 14.1392134831 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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