A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position
What does a nation teach to all its students till college? This is a task which is very convoluted. Choosing a national curriculum seems like a lucrative approach, but it comes with its own pitfalls. On the other hand, letting institutions decide their own curriculums may seem disastrous at first, but serves its function of providing a flexible system for all.
One of the most difficult part of choosing a national curriculum would be inclusion of everyone in the nation, which would also include differently abled people and slow learners. In doing so the curriculum would be either be very general or not cater to some people. This would hamper the ability of people wanting to learn. Taking a flexible option would benefit greatly to people who learn slower and need more attention.People also choose to not study in institutions and homeschool. These students learn according to their interests and will be hampered by the unfiorm curriculum.
A unified national curriculum would help in bringing awareness to all topics the curriculum deems important. This would assure that people in the nation are aware of atleast the minimal study as decided by the nation. This requires addressing the problems of inclusion of all people of all walks of life and also having a indepth understanding of wants of the people.
The curriculum is defined by schools and colleges to provide a holistic growth of the individual based on the institutions strengths and merits. Keeping one national would help if all institutions would be able to provide the same paedogogy required to each individual, which is not an easy task. Hence, a national curriculum, while, looks attractive may not be appropriate for everyone in the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...ho learn slower and need more attention.People also choose to not study in institution...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...ns and homeschool. These students learn according to their interests and will be hampered...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le of all walks of life and also having a indepth understanding of wants of the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10563380282 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86482993309 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9718602621 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227879642374 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893702686316 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545444602203 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159573297623 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441076551188 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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