a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The place where people live in unity and belongs to equal aspects is primary called as nation. Every nation has perticular set of opinion on which majority of people relays. primarily, children are the future of that nation, so they must be educated to be in unity. For them to study the equality, every provience in a nation should conduct a same national curriculam throughout the country.
A child is a base of upcoming generation of nation. He should be see the nation in Equal view. Every nation has different states, and every state has its different curriculum related to those provience. As we can see, geographical area of every state is distict considering its physical, environmental factors. So, most of the states put the syllabus of their own state in geography. So, this kind of situations can create conflict between state to state. Because of variation in curriculum, Social as well as political issues may be create between the states. This subject can also leads to political advantage.
In opposite view, It is important to study about our state, but it also can be studied as a surplus knowledge. If a student want to study, then he can borrow the books from its school library to study about its own state. Even in our times, We used to do the same for our studies.
As a student go into the college, The Scientifical, Economical subjects are introduced to him, which is universally the same. Their should not be any racism at college level. Though, the method of teaching is different, but it wont harm the syllabus further.
To avoid any racism, the children must have equal national curriculum when they are in school, because as we mould them in their childhood, they will be moulded in that way in future and they can be the part of the sparkling nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ion on which majority of people relays. primarily, children are the future of that nation...
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Message: Did you mean 'seen'?
...ming generation of nation. He should be see the nation in Equal view. Every nation ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
...tween the states. This subject can also leads to political advantage. In opposite vi...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'surplus knowledge'.
Suggestion: surplus knowledge
...ur state, but it also can be studied as a surplus knowledge. If a student want to study, then he ca...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74276527331 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62139335968 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7326273839 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6315789474 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308003785303 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892598600251 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741436473917 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166357432516 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590731068513 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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