The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effor

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The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.

The given argument states that autonomy of every country is based on strength of its border. and the illigal immgrants are responsible for it. furthermore, it is also stated that economy and national identity are endengered due to this. The given statement is logically flawed in some ways. It is partially incomplete since the assumptions are not well reasoned.

Firstly, the authors says that autonomy is based on strength of nation's borders and for that, illegal immigrants are responsible. But, it has not provided with proper reasoning. It could be possible that autonomy of country based on political, economic factors. Autonomy is not a concise factor which can be affected by only illegal immigrants.

Illigal immigrants entering in nation without any permission is serious drawback of a nation. The precaution should be taken by nation to stop them by improving its border security. Citizens should take an objection for this flaw. Illigal immigrants could be a terrorist, so why should one country takes the risk to enter them in nation.

Secondly, it is assumed that economy and national identity are comes under risk as those immigrants enters in nation. Their are various risks like terrorism, jingoism could be made by these immigrants since they belongs to other provience. Terrorism is very serious flaw when it comes to illegal immigrants.

In the history of world, their are many cases which happened due to legal issues. The one is from India and Pakistan. Their was an was in 1971 near cargil in india due to illegal immigrants from pakistan and many soldiers were killed from both the nations. Also their is better example of 9/11 in USA when twin towers are hitted by planes. All these issues arised due to illegal entries.

Furthermore, it is also said that one country should take efforts to return them into their home countries, but their is no proper reasoning for how it can achieved. It could be achieved by taking surveys in the regional area of borders.

Finally, it is seen that their is no proper set of reasoning to overcome this issues in the given argument. so the argument is considered only as rough epitome.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 361.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98060941828 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.598352716 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512465373961 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.92977294 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.92 119.503703932 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.44 23.324526521 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318409849967 0.218282227539 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805503680261 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807798660833 0.0701772020484 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140893377198 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897889950774 0.0628817314937 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.3799401198 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.3550499002 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.197005988 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.497 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.941 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5