According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the last year. Clearly, the content of these reviews is not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater quantity of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
Director of Super Screen Movie Production company claimed that Super Screen movie has a positive reviews by viewers but still people don't shows their intrest in this movies. According to their analysis, fewer people attended those movies than in any other year. They haven't told the pricings for those movies. It must be higher than the traditional movie screen. Is the pricings are affordable to the viewers? If yes, then do they provide the proper service at that pricings? It is important to know the pricings of those screens.
Since director claimed that reviewers given the positive reviews for Super Screen Movies. Reviews can be of any subject. may be they are regarding the quality of movie, quality of theater, etc. they haven't mention the reviews. Since, their are very few viewers who are aware about the Super Screen movies. many people has orthodox feelings. many people prefer more traditionalism instead of trying new things. So, the company should divert the people to watch super screen movies instead of traditional movie screens.
Company can be able to divert by differentiating the traditional and super screen movies. Advertising via various mediums like TV, Posters, Radio, Social Media will be the good platform. Also, they should provide discount for pricings so that many people could get attracted to those things and can experience the feel of super screen movies.
To improve the production of super screen movies, the production company should take the all factors into considerations, and by offering the discounts via advertisement, it is possible gain people's attraction and once people get attracted, they will prefer more super screens instead of old version of movie screens.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1403 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.029 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.491 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.769 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.372 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ive reviews by viewers but still people dont shows their intrest in this movies. Acc...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...till people dont shows their intrest in this movies. According to their analysis, fe...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ose movies than in any other year. They havent told the pricings for those movies. It ...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
... Movies. Reviews can be of any subject. may be they are regarding the quality of mo...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... Movies. Reviews can be of any subject. may be they are regarding the quality of movie...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...of movie, quality of theater, etc. they havent mention the reviews. Since, their are v...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., etc. they havent mention the reviews. Since, their are very few viewers who are awa...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...they havent mention the reviews. Since, their are very few viewers who are aware abou...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...re aware about the Super Screen movies. many people has orthodox feelings. many peop...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...ies. many people has orthodox feelings. many people prefer more traditionalism inste...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 276.0 441.139720559 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55052906035 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3581227586 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7894736842 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 23.324526521 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349231475182 0.218282227539 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110780664566 0.0743258471296 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120504279663 0.0701772020484 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227247654387 0.128457276422 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962266249121 0.0628817314937 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.3550499002 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 12.3882235529 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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